Reviews for dan vs the market
songbird011 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
:-/ I read the first two sentences...not impressed at all...PERIOD..
lazerdude chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
Well your story is kind of hard to read and you put in periods instead of commas but I hope you'll get a better writing format but other than that it looks good.
mynamemattersnot chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
How could they possibly get explosives without a special permit and why would they sell explosives openly in some random market. The only way someone could get explosives would probably be from a terrorist or from a military place. Anyways such a freaky story and if you actually know a place that sells explosives then that is uhhh ... I have nothing to say to that. Such a freaky story and second off he had no reason to blow up the entire store. This guy has issues.