|Reviews for A Simple Question|
| cluelessclown chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
| FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Really enjoyed it. Would you mind writing a second chapter?
| Echos of 2008-2009 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Oh god that was wonderful, i hope to hear more of this.
| InsertDecentNameHere chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
It's good, but if it's for an assignment try to add in some more descriptions, like 'I set the china milk jug onto the old battered wooden table' or something along those lines.
I thought it would had been interesting to see her thoughts on the situation not just 'they're doing wrong' because, at the time very few people actually knew about what was going on in the Jewish camps, including the Allies who only found out after they declared war.
Maybe try to make her come to terms with her situation more, explaining that she never knew or understood what was happening until she saw it first hand.
A LOT of criticism but I want to you get the highest mark you can on this, already it's pretty good, but just add in a lottile more and it will be amazing!