|Reviews for Fate|
| sniperpal chapter 33 . 2/28
Christ almighty, man, where do you learn to write like this? This is book publishing quality stuff, u NEED to pursue a career as an author
| sniperpal chapter 28 . 6/24/2013
Well, at least it didn't turn into a bloody shooting war. Interesting approach, dude. Dark, but interesting.
| Gravitational chapter 33 . 5/23/2013
I have to say the story is nicely written. Also thanks for writing it Ive been very sick with MONO lately and this has helped cheer me up. Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/22/2013
when will this be updated? also you are quite the good writer dispite what you say in the authors notes
| 742-X93 chapter 33 . 5/1/2013
A much-excellent piece of work. I would give it a 10 out of 10. Maybe 1 grammar error per chapter but it's really little. I tend to hope that there are more chapters. A few to close up of course.
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/22/2013
I remember a few years ago I took my Kawasaki ninja out so i could pick up my girlfriends birthday cake and it started pouring on the way back. I then proceeded to slide out and roll it into a ditch, bike was fine, a little scuffed but fine, miracuosly the cake survived unscathed. I just thought it was ironic how similar the situations were.
| rene10 chapter 33 . 3/12/2013
This is a great story, I've been addicted ever since I found it! I can't wait to see how it all ends and read more of your amazing stories!
| snakedabomb chapter 33 . 3/5/2013
lol ive read all 33 chapters in 4 days. if you cant tell I rather enjoyed it so far. Keep up the hard work!
| snakedabomb chapter 19 . 3/2/2013
dude, gotta love this song bro!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
So far I'm loving the story. I am not a big fan of fanfics that tend to lean into the non-canon side of the game, but the whole plot and your 'what if theory' is really eye catching. As long as you keep the characters in character I'm happy and you're doing a great job at it. :)
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 10 . 2/18/2013
Really awesome chapter. That puts in some sexual tension for later. I'll keep reading to find out what comes next.
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 3 . 2/12/2013
This was awesome. I LOLed when I reached the part of Krystal being discribed as 'as harmless as a fly' or 'as dangerous as Andross.'! LOL
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Hmm, this tells me it is going to be quite interesting. Looking foward to reading the rest of it when I get the time. :D I normally don't review a story until I finish it, but this is one of those which I make exceptions.
Oh, and Wolfsalvo recommended me to this story!
| Michael51996 chapter 33 . 2/1/2013
Cheers to you as well sir or maddam person!
| krystalluver chapter 33 . 1/21/2013
i thought u quit