Reviews for Something Went Wrong
reader chapter 1 . 2/24
OMG...ILOVE IT!especially the beging and how they both wanted it
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11
This webpage is actually darker than I would have ever imagined.
Thatrandomloner chapter 1 . 1/9
*whacks face against keyboard* *starts randomly laughing* I LOVED it! Literally, I'm dying; one from how well this is written, and two because I never (like ever) believe that being f***** by a minotaur could be so hot... This is just fudging fabulous. ;)
telesariyeh chapter 1 . 1/10
All my guilty pleasures are basically found in your stories. I mean, whoa, this is another level of pure smut genius. You're awesome. You have no idea how much I get turned on and stuff.
daniel czk chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
so hot...
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Fuck, is it bad if you start lusting after the Minotaur? lol
Jaid La K chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
That was incredible hot and I am not ashamed to say that because of how well you wrote should have more of these spontaneous ideas :-D
tjw242 chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
Holy shit. Is kind of all I can say. Just wow.
Well done :D
NOOOOOOOOOOOO chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
darklovers16 chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Normally I'm not one for beasts and stuff... but damn... I'm impressed..
POml chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Damn it didn't end with the minotaur getting killed..
I like him but I like even more when he is killed
and Percy dominating him and thrusting Riptide down the monster ass would have been so freaking hot
then he would cut the beast privates and take it as a spoil of war before slicing the begging monsters' throat and urging it to come back faster next time so that they could have some more bloody fun, that would event with yet another destruction of the mighty, sexy beast..
allthingsfanfiction chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
I loved this story. Can you please write more of this?
Zero chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
You know at first it seemed like a bad idea but man this was unexpectedly hot especially the dirty talk to bad there's only two of them good work
Flmaing Rose chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
I don't know wether to laugh or jerk off…

Oh well, I loved it anyway! Thanks!
savannah chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
*Dies from nose bleed*
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