|Reviews for Lessons of Intimacy|
| SanjiRoronoa chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
| LyricoJ chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I feel like im the one that being kissed..kk
| mini-eggs1 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Haha, this was so funny! Would have really loved a second chapter
| Nami Erins chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Kawaii ne. Part two please? Zoro's perspective of the kiss. :))
| KlawxXx chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
This was really, really cute! I don't think there was any OOC at all, actually. I'm quite ecstatic about how well it fits into the original story, with Luffy just being Luffy and all. Ahahaha xD
I love how Zoro swept Sanji completely off his feet, and both their reactions. Obviously Zoro was affected as well. I am glad Sanji was man enough to at least admit it to himself.
Oi! Weren't you talking bout a sequel?! *Mock pouts* Lol, nah, jk. This is just a plot ripe for plucking! Lots of material! You should give yourself more credit :) I think you wrote this out amazingly, it has to be to catch my attention (not to sound spoiled or anything, but meh xD) I probably am *guilty*
Thought I'd leave some of my appreciation! I looooved this!
| PKC chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Fun story! Really loved the writing and mini-plot, but why do i need a japanese lesson mid-reading? Was a bit off putting. That aside, the story itself was an enjoyable read and I would love to read more from the author.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
This was so funny-i loved it. can't wait for the sequel
| frostytrish chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Haha, amazing story. It really was rated too high in my opinion just because they were only freaking out about a kiss, but it was still hilarious. XD
| evilisdaily chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I absolutely loved reading this, i look forward to more :3
| MizukiKobayashi chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
*staring at le screen* Need more! :D
| kayak chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
My biggest question is: what book was Luffy reading? It's strange none of the Straw Hat pirates bothered to ask him this.
I don't recommend mixing in Japanese phrases, especially if you're not familiar with it. Every Japanese phrase you used can be easily written in English so I don't see the point of it. It just makes reading harder for people who don't understand Japanese and interrupts the flow of your story.
| Pocky Ichigo chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Aw I wasn't login when I posted the last comment, sorry xD
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
That was really funny :D
I would have loved a second chapter but that's nice the way it is too!
Oh, and when it's said in a exclamation tone, you can say only "honto?" instead of "honto ni?" which sounds too much
Thank you for writing this :D
| Arden Tenjou chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
It was super cute and I would love to see a continuation of their relationship. The Japanese I would suggest taking out, for many reasons. I speak Japanese and there were mistakes, for example "baka yarou" (stupid jerk) not "baka iro" (stupid color) and "gomen" (sorry) rather than "gome" (not a word). Also, someone like Luffy would really only say "nani" like that if he were very surprised, but instead "eh?" (a noise of mild surprise). He'd also be more likely to say "nande" rather than "doushite" which is more proper. But in general code switching between two languages in a bilingual audience is acceptable but only when circumstances permit it, for example when an idiom is much better expressed in Japanese than in English. Personally, I don't mind people saying "ne" either, although overuse of "baka" really gets on my nerves. And to be honest, this isn't really a bilingual audience. I realize you're going for a certain feel of the story, and to maintain the sense that you're watching the anime for example. But the story is plenty cute enough, and except for the Japanese, I would love to read more of it.
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