|Reviews for Captivated|
| shahira chapter 29 . 11/5/2013
I've just finished reading this story all in one long session. It took me awhile, but once I started it, I couldn't put it down! It's amazing how you managed moving the character to such an improbable scenario and still have them be true to themselves.
I particularly appreciated that you made Lindsay a villain, because it's something we don't see in fanfics very often, and yet in the show she appears in several occasions to be consciously working to prevent Brian from evolving, always saying exactly the wrong thing, just to get him not to grow up, to stop him from changing, even when he's clearly making an effort to change for the best (and let's not even talk about her catastrophic intervention in the show's finale!).
And I also liked your choice of Daphne as the child's mother, because even in the show I could see it coming, and I'm convinced that would have been the character's logical path, if the show had gone on.
I'm very glad you didn't make this story about the usual Brian-Justin-Michael triangle, because there are a lot of fanfics about that, and yours was finally something different, something original.
Also, your Craig was amazing. I would have never thought of reading a fanfic in which he actually accepts Justin's orientation, even if begrudgingly so. I mean, he still is a piece of ****, but so many stories are just about him being evil incarnate, that I'm glad to finally read something where he's not the center of the action. Congratulations for achieving an astounding degree of originality and still keeping it, somehow, believable!
The only thing that left me a little disappointed was not seeing Emmett, because I like him and I was expecting his flame to burn bright even in Brakania.
Now I'm really looking forward to read the sequel. I hope it's as good as this story.
(By the way, I love your choice of name for Prince Brahim El-Khadir, and the country of Brakania sounds just like it could exist. I only find find it difficult to imagine an Arab man can be named Theodore Schmidt, and an Arab woman Lindsay...)
| Orgasmic Bunnies chapter 29 . 2/28/2013
| Liliom99 chapter 29 . 2/22/2013
Thanks for this bonus! Sweet and moving, and hot. Hugs, Lil
| Skylar chapter 29 . 2/21/2013
This was a great Happy Ever After chapter. Thank you for it. I just love how devoted Brian is to Justin and how they love each other. I am glad you are considering maybe revisiting these two characters again in the future. I would love a chapter some time with them and their children on the island on a mini vacation. Or the 'old' king with his grand-children. I am just glad this is not so much good-bye as it might be a 'see you later'. Thanks again.
| toobeauty chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
wow what a nice epilogue to a fabulous story!
Looking forward to reading those future promised sequels!
| Marley5815 chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
I loved this story. I'm sad to see its over but glad it had a happy ending. Thanks for writing it.
| I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
I loved this story so much!
| Darrencrissluv chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
| kellyharper chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
read the ENTIRE thing in less that 24 hrs. Can't wait to see if you do a sequel. I want to see what happens when Linds finds out Daf is carring the child! She's going to FREAK!
| kagi-chan2 chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
What a sappy end! But it was sweet. For the sequel you could be mean, you mentioned the test they want to take to go bareback... A bit's drama...
| boriqua522 chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
All i can say is...awwwww sniff sniff. That was so freakin great. I may get caught reading this at work, but it was worth the risk. That's okay though, since i've fully combusted after that beginning scene, i may notnot be able to work the rest of the day :-P
Will miss this story, but thank you for all your hard work.
| Nisa Cullen chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
Let me lead with my predominant thoughts I WANT MORE!
I really like these two that seemed so unlikely from the start.
"We are together forever, Justin. No matter where we are living that together... what we have will last forever" gah! Our prince or King now knows how to make a boy(or girl) swoon!
"You've told me that with each sacrifice you've made for me... and even further when you joined your life to mine." He placed a gentle kiss on Justin's lips, whispering fervently, "I plan to spend the rest of my life convincing you that you made the right decision."
This is so sweet and beautiful and completely shows how much Brian has changed! He see Justin's worth and really wants to see his captive happy.
Thank you much for writing these two, I am just sad it's over!
| RRW chapter 29 . 2/20/2013
Brilliant story...well done!
| Nisa Cullen chapter 28 . 2/18/2013
Wow just wow!
". All I want to think about is that I'm about to marry the man I love. Tomorrow will take care of itself."
Guh! That line I love it! This is such a beautiful ending! From the stat with Brian being Royalty and Justin being reluctant I didn't know where this was gong but I enjoyed the ride. But to see them now happily married, Brian as king and Daphne giving them the gift of a future heir? I love it! I love it all!
Congrats for completing yet another story and thank you so much for writing!
Just one questions Justin isn't the queen so what's his title in this world now that he's married to the king?
Thanks again for writing,
| Nisa Cullen chapter 27 . 2/18/2013
"This is the only night we spend apart, Taylor... for the rest of our lives." Awww this is all kinds of sweet! I love this!