Reviews for baby, don't you worry
empathapathique chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Oh, WOW. Oh damn. Well. Gosh. Damn.

Okay. Coherence. I no like Inoue, either, but you wrote her so damn well. Coming in on such an intimate moment, and the feelings it stirs in her. I feel bad for her, but then I don't, because you can't help who you want.

This was really great. I loved the details-especially those associated with the body parts. Being aware of a character's physical presence is so important when you're writing, and you nailed it, completely.

Damn. I'm still completely blown away.

And that summary! Yes. Please. More.
a warrior queen chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
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PORN

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AND THEN SHE CREAMED HERSELF AND CALLED ISHIDA TO LICK IT CLEAN

/SHOTSHOTSHOT
Sepsis chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
wow! Im never really sure what to think of Orihime. I mean yeah, she can be annoying but at the same time shes strong in her own way, I guess? And she really has so many good sides, that she only tries to help her friends and that she doesnt want to think bad of them or would do anything for them.

"crushed up against the wall as the man she loved and the girl she should have hated did something darker than kissing"

Thats why I loved that part! She cant hate Rukia even though shes with the guy she loves so much. :)

Shes hurting so much and wishes to be in Rukias place but she cant do anything against it. Still, its interesting to see this side of Orihime. And you realy wrote that beautiful!