Reviews for Of Blood and Loyalty
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
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Haldir639 chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
A very nice fic, although I think you went somewhat overboard on the deaths of Morgana and Agravaine. Other than that, it was excellent, especially the bromance at the end.

Sequel?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I hope your fragile ego can handle some stroking. I loved this so much. It was fantastically written an d detailed and the characters we re in character savings the action was horrifying in a good way and I don't think my heart can take it.v
Hawkwing-Mistkit chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
This is really good! but I think that the violence was a bit ooc, but its still really great!
Ecri chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I was absolutely entranced by this story. It was intense, yet believable. It was horrifying, yet beautiful. It was above all a cathartic and emotionally satisfying magic reveal than any I have read. Kudos, and keep writing!
delicateruins chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
The mental torture that Merlin put Morgana through was fascinating - color me morbid! But I freakishly loved it!
Raven's Dusk chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Ah... Wow. It starts pretty violent, but that was to be expected. :)
Great story, wonderful plot and word choice, it's really amazing!
Merry Christmas!
Midnight Venom chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Aweee... I loved this!
Rubes99 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Loved it.
Merlyn Pyndragon chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
"You are my lord and my master, my mentor and my pupil, my king and my brother and my friend. You are my destiny and mine alone; mine to guide, mine to protect, mine to raise up when those who scoff at your youth would knock you down. And you may scoff, too, that your bumbling manservant might do what others cannot, what your knights cannot, what you yourself cannot, but you are everything, and all I have, all I am, is at your disposal."

Magnificent.
Lacuna Miyamoto chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Merlin's speech and Arthur's return speech were both very nice. And how they so easily slide into equals in the end was also nice.

Thank you.
flour-chan xXx SSS chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
gorgeous absolutely gorgeous xx bit gory but that can't harm anyone XD if anything it brings the story to life more so than you have wonderfully done so already xx
ChineseRoom 23 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This is pretty good. I thought it was excellent the way how you had that speech Merlin and Arthur gave each other. It's like the bond they have to each other has come into light and it made them stronger together. I also like how brutal Merlin was to was to Morgana when she was dying, I havent watched the 4th season yet so I'm not sure whats going on yet but I know that was the best part of this fic, right after Merlin and Arthur's pledge to each other.
Kaminari Rin chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
T-T I know I said Id review sooner, but I got a real sucky cold that made me stay in bed for a week. Sorry.. u.u

Whoa, that emotion-enhancing spell dedinitely wasnt the brightest idea Morgana had. o.0

I really liked the interaction between Merlin and Arthur, and Merlins speech of awesomeness *worships*.

And the ending wasnt crappy! :o It kind of balances the story. Something nice and happy against the gore at the beginning. :)

Now, I just have to get back to the Speech of Awesomeness. Someone should write to the makers of Merlin telling them to look at Merlin fanfics sometime. At a certain story called "Blood and Loyalty" by a certain writer called ebony rayne. And while theyre at it they should beg to be allowed to use this for the series. As in, the whole story, not just Merlins little speech. That would make an interesting episode. :D
Mo.The.All.Knowing chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Great work definitely one of the best reveal fics I've read i like how you man edged to capture Arthur's thoats and feelinging and still keep him in character
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