Reviews for Like Father, Like Son
elfx9 chapter 11 . 4/10/2012
Wow, a very brave and intense chapter. I imagine it would have been just as hard for you to write as it is for us to read, but it's right and important for the story, and the emotional mindset you put Ste in (doing this out of bleakness, resignation and the sake of his kids) was perfect to steer the chapter. Mr Brady truly is a sick, evil man and you write him very well, saying this is less about sex and more about control; he makes my skin crawl, and my heart literally dropped when he made his order 'take off your clothes and lie on the bed'. Putting it like that was almost more awful than any of the previous attacks because it's just so cold and straight-forward and sickening. Poor Ste; I could have died for him in this chapter. Amazing work once again.
ruthyroo chapter 11 . 4/10/2012
evil man brilliant chapter xxxxx
Hannival chapter 11 . 4/10/2012
Jesus Christ, you almost gave me a fucking heart attack! I can't really form coherent thoughts at the moment, but believe me, you surely know how to do a cliffhanger. One can really feel Ste's desperation, his fear, his pain... STEEEE CUTIE BABY SUNSHINE DON'T GIVE UP, PLEASEEEEEE! *shrieks*

I guess I'll just stay here, clutching my hands and waiting for the next chapter (and for Brady's death, I hope).

RUN, PADDY, RUUUUUUUN!
STU chapter 11 . 4/10/2012
IF PADDY DOESENT GET IT NOW HE NEVER WILL REALLY HOPE SOMEONE HAS FOLLOWED PADDY BRENDAN WHERE ARE U WHEN STE NEEDS YOU
HeyBanana chapter 11 . 4/9/2012
Jesus, Mary and Joseph!

This chapter was written brilliantly! You captured Stes defeat and Bradys victory really well. You could really empathize with Ste, doing it for his children.

Padriag bursting in on them was a stroke of genius; I bet he feels a right penis for believing his granddad now.

So yeah, well done on an amazinggg chapter. I know you said this is the last stroy you're going to do, but I may have to persuade you to change you mind ;)

xx
shun95145 chapter 11 . 4/9/2012
OMG, I really do hate Brady. Just so evil that he need Sri be taken out. Ahhh, love this and hate it at the same time be uses I can't stop reading it. Need to know what happens next. Thank you, this is becoming my fav trilogy.
elfx9 chapter 10 . 4/9/2012
Oh my goodness, please DO update quickly... what is Ste THINKING putting himself in such a dangerous situation? This is the man who not only hates him to the point of probably being willing to kill him, but also tried to rape him twice! And it worries me that Ste's in such a bleak and detached state of mind where he probably sees no light from here. What an interesting place to get them to. I can't wait to read more. And Padraig better feel damn sorry when he realises what he's done to Brendan and Ste's relationship; after all, he himself saw how happy Brendan was. The one saving grace about Ste going to visit Mr Brady now, is I suspect Padraig is going there too, and in that case a nice caught-in-the-act drama seems promising.
stu chapter 10 . 4/9/2012
nice one declan and hope ste doesent get hurt hope someone stops himx
shun95145 chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
Please update soon, need to make sure Ste doesn't get hirt by Brady. God Brendan should know better and trust Ste more. Really hate Brady right now, hope he loses everything for all the evil he has done. Great work.
shoppinglegends chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
ah im scared :S well done though cant wait for more!
HeyBanana chapter 10 . 4/8/2012
Have to admit, feeling a wee bit sorry for Padders - His granddad has manipulated and used the fact that they're related to get him to do what he wants. I hope Pad tells everyone how much his granddad turned him against ste and so forth...

Too much love for Declan, he knew Ste didn't do it, and if it wasn't for him and his maturity, Brendan probably would have smashed Stes face in and things would have gone swiftly downhill without redemption!

Moving on, whats Ste doing at the B and B? Clearly hes going to meet Mr Brady, but what are they going to do? Slightly concerned for Ste now... :S

Well done on another epic chapter. Update soon? Like NOW? ;)

Xx
GreenAngelHeart chapter 9 . 4/8/2012
That was so heart-wrenching, so difficult to read. But I am praying the ending will be happy.
stu chapter 9 . 4/6/2012
brendan u really have done it now paddy u need telling wot ur lies have done thank god declans got sense loved amys defence of ste hope stes gonna be ok brendan needs to sort this cos if he doesent this time he will have to live with the knowledge that he did nothing update soon
elfx9 chapter 9 . 4/6/2012
It's hard to tell whether this is the worst thing Brendan's ever done... since not supporting Ste after the attempted rape was appalling of him as well. I think Ste's better off without him, and you did a great job in this chapter of really getting the mixture of fear hurt and disappointment across, and that awful moment when Brendan realised his mistake. Somehow though, thanks to your writing, I do feel for Brendan. You described it well by saying about the 'red fog' (or something like that!) when it comes to hearing your kid has been hurt. The tension at the end was amazing. Spot on. I just felt crushed for Ste. How awful, when they had come so far, for this to happen :( Really good job.
shun95145 chapter 9 . 4/6/2012
Okay, this had been such a great story that I can't wait to see what happens next. You have me by the set of my pants wanting more. Please keep it up I hope that this all works out because I love how Ste and Brendan are really trying to make it wok. Thanks
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