|Reviews for Star Wars: The Jedi Marauder|
| firestorm100 chapter 72 . 1/16
A brilliant story. I Hope that you will continue with it
| misteryman526 chapter 2 . 1/14/2014
Oh, and what's up with your constant use of the names of the actors in your story summaries? It's annoying and a waste of space, since your readers will either already know who played the characters in the movies or won't care.
| misteryman526 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
This seems more like the notes for a story rather than the finished product. You've got some good ideas but the characters don't behave in a realistic manner and the plot doesn't proceed logically. For example; Sirius, Remus, and Peter are summoned to Godric's Hollow and told they are being sent to another Galaxy with no money or belongings and THEY JUST AGREE! And then they arrive (minus Peter) and instead of being freaked out that their friend is missing, they conclude that his absence proves he was a traitor. WTF?! There should have been A LOT more preparation to leave and then you could have had Peter off after they arrived. Perhaps they could have discovered his Dark Mark or some other proof of his treachery. You really need to rewrite this mess.
| Spartan1117 chapter 49 . 10/2/2013
ummmm if im read something wrong at some point Harry's wife didnt die at all?
| praeceps29 chapter 51 . 7/21/2013
we[[ i was enjoying this ti[[ you decided to pair harry with the red headed idiot
| praeceps29 chapter 23 . 7/21/2013
you have a good thing going but a serious re write is needed this story reads more [ike a bad documentary
| gennastar chapter 23 . 4/1/2013
The story is fine. The difficulty in storytelling here is you as a writer are presenting a summary of conclusions and refraining in saying how anyone got to those conclusions.
In distilling the sw universe it can be helpful but it doesn't really suggest what's important to the story itself.
| Sakura Lisel chapter 2 . 3/21/2013
Wait so Lily basically ABANDONED both Harry and James when James chose to become a Jedi? If I were James if it were a choice between his WIFE and family he should have chosen to stay with Lily and raise Harry together rather than become a Jedi. Why didn't Lily at least insist on taking her son with her instead of letting James and the Jedi take Harry to be trained when he got older, so she wouldn't have had to spend the next decade barely seeing her husband, son, and friends who came with them to the Star Wars universe.
| Grrrrr chapter 16 . 1/22/2013
| hogwart lady chapter 16 . 1/14/2013
Awesome chapters I love how u r writing it man I can't wait for more
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/11/2012
¿TANTOS CONTINUARA ESPARCIDOS Y NINGUN Fin A La VISITA?
| hogwart lady chapter 11 . 4/2/2012
awesome job i hope sirus will b okay
| Sprmanfan chapter 7 . 3/31/2012
Do you think you will be bringing the Potter family back together at any point?
| Sprmanfan chapter 8 . 3/31/2012
I have to say I like what you have done with this story so far! I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Have you given any thoughts to pairings?
| hogwart lady chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
Wow I liketjis alot and I like how u have it set up