|Reviews for The Hero|
| Rebel S2 chapter 18 . 7/30/2014
Wow. Really depressing. I mean, it had it's good moments, really, and I loved those, but overall...depressing.
But I only feel that way because this was very well written. Seriously. I admire you for writing this. It was a nice take on Sonic and Tails' friendship, and the additional appearances of Amy and Knuckles were very nice as well.
| Lynn chapter 15 . 5/19/2014
Nicely written story on a deep level.I love how Sonic takes care of 's a kind of brother I wish I had.
| AriMarvelUniverse chapter 18 . 4/18/2014
Yup, I'm crying.
| AriMarvelUniverse chapter 17 . 4/18/2014
Oh man, I'm about to cry...
| ChristianHedgie chapter 18 . 7/16/2013
I liked this at first, but WHAT THE XXXX HAPPENED?! HE XXXXXXX DIED! Not only that but you describe everything to the up most detail! WHY?! WHY DO YOU FILL MY MIND WITH FALSE HOPE ONLY TO BRUTALLY EXPLAIN THE HORROR OF A SLOW, PAINFUL DEATH?! DO YOU REALIZE HOW MUCH I CRIED?! You ripped my heart out of my chest only to squeeze it painfully to the point where there is a puddle of blood on the floor intermixed with constant shedding tears! I will have nightmares for weeks full of images of fire burning and spitting the ashes of a friend so dear...
| TheBlurredLine23 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
First, I have to tell you that I am very glad that I am now here. Some of the first stories I have read on here are from you, and you serve as a huge inspiration for me. Now I am finally getting to review a story I love…yay!
[What is it like to be Sonic?]
Huh, that's a good question, one that I try to ask myself every time I write about him.
Wow, Tails…staying up too late again, huh? Sounds like him. :)
Although it is sad (which was the intention, of course), I do like the way you described Sonic's crying. Him being him, it must've taken something REAL horrid to make him cry like that. That side of him is one we rarely see, and only in fan-fiction besides. (At least, not that I've ever heard of.)
[I never thought I'd see Sonic like that.]
Me either, Tails. Nobody ever does. But sometimes I do wonder, "How much does he actually hide?"
Well, that's it for now. I'll see you next chapter!
| GAMEONREDLAZER chapter 18 . 6/1/2013
A very heartfelt story. I cryed a little at the ending.
| Stitchfan 82 chapter 15 . 4/19/2013
This was looking better, but 4 little words ruined it.
Then you got sick.
Sick, again?! After you put them through all that?!
With only 3 chapters to go, its obvious what is coming.
I went ahead and looked at revues for the last chapter, just to know.
And its not good.
I do not want to read the ending but something is driving me to do it any way.
This story is well written and that makes it worse.
Why do so many good writers do so many sad story’s.
Its depressing. I don’t need Fan fiction to make me depressed.
Real life will do that!
Its especially depressing when you relate to the characters,
Like sonic I have a hard time reading, if not for texts to speech software I could not have read this story or written this review.
But why put them through all that. What about Tails how will he go on with out his best friend sonic he worked so hard to save him. And after all that… :( WHY why why why!
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/10/2012
I think, the only thing I disliked about this story, is that you didn't label it as a tragedy. This was really good otherwise. For a tragedy.
Please label them as tragedies next time?
| Polska99 chapter 18 . 6/26/2012
OMG! I loved the Tails/Sonic brother bond, but the ending was just so sad!
| Camobamo1 chapter 18 . 5/25/2012
Oh, my gosh! So sad! I felt like I was gonna cry during the last few chapters! It was a good story, though! Man, why can't I write like that?
| gameloverx chapter 18 . 4/14/2012
this, is the saddest story i had ever read in my life! you realy are a good writer.
| doylewells chapter 18 . 4/11/2012
NOOOOOO! ,(. That made me cry! Such a tragic ending... (sniff). Will you be making a sequel, as in a portrayal of like Tails life in the future without his big brother? Please reply in a pm. Thanks for the awesome story btw!
| PhantomGurl12344 chapter 18 . 4/11/2012
AWWWW! The epilogue? It- it's done? over? NOOOOOO-kay. Just saying it was REEAAALLYYYY good. But this story had to end SOMEWHERE, right? :P You did very well on this, goodjob! It's hard to make me cry. Lol :P
| PhantomGurl12344 chapter 17 . 4/10/2012
AWWWWWWWWWWW! :'( Sonic died! WHY! HE WAS SO YOUNG! NOOOOOOOOOO- sorry :S lol, this is getting better and better!