Reviews for Entourage
Guest chapter 24 . 12/24/2021
Guest chapter 22 . 12/24/2021
british idiots parslemouths are a highly respected form of magic in many parts of asia and south america
Guest chapter 19 . 12/24/2021
sussy amogus
Guest chapter 3 . 12/24/2021
we need a ship name
Twisted Pxl chapter 27 . 12/1/2021
This is an interesting story and a good take on how Naruto is treated due to being the host of Kurama. Although him defecting and killing Hinata was out of the blue yet should have expected the defection since he didn't really have many connections.

I myself didn't mind the crow summons being used. I enjoy seeing stories that change up what contract the characters obtain compared to canon or even other fanfics. Also I don't think it is ever revealed in canon when he got the crow contract or at least not in the manga. I personally think he had it since at least the Chunin Exams since I think he used them at that point. Plus there is the fact he had the Shishui Sharingan implanted in Naruto. I doubt a genjutsu would have been as effective.

Was the reason why you had Hinata killed off cause you hate her? Not sure why when you effectively changed her as a product of having Naruto not be around. I don't think she was intended to be a stalker even though she had stalker like tendencies. It all came down to the fact she didn't have the confidence she gained later on in Shippuden and a crush she had on Naruto that outside of the manga would have died off without constant contact.

Now I am not saying you shouldn't hate canon Hinata. Everyone has their likes and dislikes which is normal. I just don't understand how someone can have such hate for a character that instead of making them into someone better they are portrayed worse than canon.

On a side note, I noticed that you were in the process of fixing some chapters that had block text. Chapters 3 - 7 were hard to read with all the block text but I did get through it. At least the rest had this fixed and there were more readable.
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 27 . 11/27/2021
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 25 . 11/27/2021
Yeah 12 years old boy just attempted murder on school professor. What a great students this school has.

Seriously, at the mall scene, I assumed they have sex and somehow get half-naked, this is a great time to use transformation (both magic and chakra) or even genjutsu. Oh wait. He can’t, he’s with muggle ,so no magic. Sorry :l
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 24 . 11/27/2021
Uh it was nice and all, but can’t he just use genjutsu to hide or trick the office, lady at convenience store. Even if he was dead tired, and disoriented by the teleport? He should be able to, hmmm. Or even better try to talk his out like the OG Naruto :D

Pansy using that boy as Naruto replacement for a time being?
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 23 . 11/27/2021
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 18 . 11/26/2021
That’s a second time Naruto almost get killed by Ron :P
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 17 . 11/26/2021
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 12 . 11/26/2021
Oh I skipped this chapter. Nice
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 16 . 11/26/2021
You gonna get your hands cut, breaking window and climbing on broken shards. Camilie is 15 ,right? Oh lord, a girl driver. So why not used genjutsu when cop pulled ll the group over? Wait did something happen, or I forgot about the ending at book one already? I need to reread that chapter again. Hmmm
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 15 . 11/26/2021
Ah I think this is getting to long just for book one and characters building (?) I just want to see how Naruto grow and develop as a character in Harry Potter crossover. From a cruel meanie to a cruel meanie with a girlfriend :P
Marvelous Pathetic chapter 14 . 11/25/2021
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