Could have been really good but the curse mark would FAILED on Naruto due to the fox. The seal protects Naruto mind, body and sould... mostly it does however that would not stop it from Destroying the small soul part of that snakes cusre mark. The fox seal would need to be chnged to let that happen and NO way that snake has that high of sealing skill. He would never live if the 9 tails got out or Pein would kill him for teying to take Naruto/9 tails.

This was so funny and relatable, i was on the same situation Naruto had but my experience was with a pen and at work where i got high with one of my co worker’s, he was a first timer so he was a little paranoid at first but after that it was hella fun. Ps i think i should try that coffee shit you spoke about to see if it’s true

I hope then next chapter comes soon

No wey no mames lo dejaste en el momento mas chingon de la trama

Loving the story. Please continue

HAHAHAHA THAT'S FUNNY AS HELL

Firing Cruz cruton ahahahah

KILL THEM ALL NARUTO KRIGAKURE SHALL HELP U

british idiots parslemouths are a highly respected form of magic in many parts of asia and south america

sussy amogus

we need a ship name

This is an interesting story and a good take on how Naruto is treated due to being the host of Kurama. Although him defecting and killing Hinata was out of the blue yet should have expected the defection since he didn't really have many connections.

I myself didn't mind the crow summons being used. I enjoy seeing stories that change up what contract the characters obtain compared to canon or even other fanfics. Also I don't think it is ever revealed in canon when he got the crow contract or at least not in the manga. I personally think he had it since at least the Chunin Exams since I think he used them at that point. Plus there is the fact he had the Shishui Sharingan implanted in Naruto. I doubt a genjutsu would have been as effective.

Was the reason why you had Hinata killed off cause you hate her? Not sure why when you effectively changed her as a product of having Naruto not be around. I don't think she was intended to be a stalker even though she had stalker like tendencies. It all came down to the fact she didn't have the confidence she gained later on in Shippuden and a crush she had on Naruto that outside of the manga would have died off without constant contact.

Now I am not saying you shouldn't hate canon Hinata. Everyone has their likes and dislikes which is normal. I just don't understand how someone can have such hate for a character that instead of making them into someone better they are portrayed worse than canon.

On a side note, I noticed that you were in the process of fixing some chapters that had block text. Chapters 3 - 7 were hard to read with all the block text but I did get through it. At least the rest had this fixed and there were more readable.

Nice?

Yeah 12 years old boy just attempted murder on school professor. What a great students this school has.

Seriously, at the mall scene, I assumed they have sex and somehow get half-naked, this is a great time to use transformation (both magic and chakra) or even genjutsu. Oh wait. He can’t, he’s with muggle ,so no magic. Sorry :l

Uh it was nice and all, but can’t he just use genjutsu to hide or trick the office, lady at convenience store. Even if he was dead tired, and disoriented by the teleport? He should be able to, hmmm. Or even better try to talk his out like the OG Naruto :D

Pansy using that boy as Naruto replacement for a time being?