Reviews for Entourage
Mr.Heller chapter 24 . 10/2/2020
I'll never stop waiting.
Eldrago chapter 3 . 8/2/2020
Hey man, your story is awesome as compared others I have read
Alexander Black V chapter 1 . 1/2/2020
Update bitch
All for anime chapter 25 . 12/7/2019
Dear author,
I want to tell you that your story is absolutely amazing! Everything is so interesting! I love the way you depict Naruto as a character and his struggles in the Potterverse. The fact that he is sorted in house Slytherin makes it even more interesting, in my opinion, that if he was put in Gryffindor. He is kinda the opposite that you would expect in a Slytherin. He interact with Muggles, doesn't really care what blood you are, makes friendships with people, is protective of who he held dear, etc. His relationship with other Slytherins is the best thing in this story. Malfoy is a very good friend and is more sympathetic than in the original work. Theodore and Blaise are just too hilarious. It's fun to see them act as normal teenagers. Pansy is just too lovable. Not because of her attitude, but because you made her a sympathetic character just like Malfoy. You can see that she have a soft side and that she REALLY likes Naruto. Naruto also seems to like her. His final goodbye to her was emotional and you can see they probably want to become more than friends but Naruto won't allow that for her sake. He's hurt inside because he's afraid to love someone since nobody ever seemed to show him any sign of love before, perhaps he's also afraid to be loved since he doesn't know where it's going to bring him. Naruto now realize that his place belongs at the side of friends and Pansy at Hogwarts.
Concerning the arcs of the story, really well done. I liked the ending of the Philosopher stone arc where Slytherin is winning the house cup instead of Griffyndor. It was a real dick move from Dumbledore in the movie to make them think that they won while he decided to abrutly give the win to Griffyndor.
The Chamber of Secrets arc, while not finished in your story, is my FAVORITE movie from the series. The idea of Naruto eventually finding the Chamber is freakin interesting. Naruto speaking Parseltongue seems badass. Also, does Pansy I've found Tom Riddle diary? It would make sense since she could find comfort in the journal since Naruto has left Hogwarts. Voldemort will surely try to manipulate her to open the Chamber.
To finish, I also wanted to tell you what will you decide with the future of the story? Personally, I wish that you could AT LEAST finish the Chamber of Secrets arc. This story is too good to be abandonned. This is probably the greatest Naruto/Harry Potter crossover E.V.E.R! If you wish to abandon it, please at least write an author's note to make us know. That's all I would ask for that. I know it's been some years since you last updated (3 years from this December 28), but I still have hope that you will eventually update. Some authors are coming back and start writing some years later. Just let us know, for all the people who followed your journey with this great masterpiece of a fic. When I think about it, with your blessing, could I write the final chapters of this arc if you eventually decide to not come back? I will credit you as the original author. I will try my best, even if I know I can't possibly reach your talent and humor in your writing. But honestly, I would prefer it would be you who will continue. I don't know if you will read this review, but know that I will always remember this great fic. Never give up!
Phazonic Steel chapter 4 . 4/4/2019
Dumbledore is hands down my favorite character be it movie or this
Phazonic Steel chapter 1 . 4/4/2019
Damn sucks you don’t write anymore
WarpedMalice chapter 25 . 3/21/2019
More I need more give me more! Thank you for the chapter.
WarpedMalice chapter 9 . 3/21/2019
I’m loving the interactions between them and how their friendship and romance is building.
WarpedMalice chapter 7 . 3/21/2019
Love it! Keep them coming!
WarpedMalice chapter 6 . 3/21/2019
Thanks for the chapter! This is my third or fourth time reading your story from the start. I very rarely skip dialogue even though I’ve read it a few times cause it just so gratifying. I still hope you are open to a love triangle between naruto hermione and pansy. I really think it can work and I also don’t really want hermione to end up with anyone else especially Ron cause I completely hate him cause of your portrayal of him haha. I already gave my reason last chapter but if you want even more I’ll write a few pages if I have to. Just message me. Love love love this story and I really want to see more.
WarpedMalice chapter 5 . 3/21/2019
I know this is way late but I’m hoping the pairing hasn’t been completely finalized yet. I actually like a love triangle in this situation. Both girls embody a different feel and bring out a different but much needed side from naruto. Pansy is more daring and open, she is quick to love and go all out with her heart which gives her an edge over hermione. She brings out narutos livelyness that he lost while being a ninja and helps him become more open I guess. Hermione is shy and slow to develop but she is smart and very strong minded in her thoughts. She will keep naruto from falling over the edge or losing him self by being an anchor or support when he truely needs it. They will be there constantly influencing naruto, helping develop him and changing how he does stuff depending one which girl he is with. They can both be trying to get him and you can always have him spend time with one and that makes the other a little jealous and as the years go by they kind of just realize they both love him and they got tired of trying to force him to choose cause he couldn’t let either one of them go. It doesn’t have to get to the point where they are having threesomes and stuff but it can be like they start to become friends and start to slowly trust each other knowing that the other woman is doing everything she can to love and protect their man and they just kind of accept each pairing are great and I definitely advocate for them, but I hate when you build such a strong bond and sense of love between the mc and a girl and then she just gets sidelined. I like small Barnes that truely give ample service to all those involved. And for why they start to accept each other instead of what is the norm for where they grow up is by them both getting tons of exposure to narutos life in the elemental nations. Have their views slowly altered by constant interaction with Anko and maybe put them in a situation where they see a harem that’s actually working or maybe seeing a woman who couldn’t accept the harem and regretted losing the one she loves to the other woman.
yindragonkiba chapter 25 . 8/29/2018
Love it thus far
Joinnpoint chapter 8 . 8/9/2018
Im sorry your story is great but my problem with it is just that there is too much filler in between chapters and it just has me lose intrest in the story.
Monster King chapter 25 . 6/4/2018
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon.
AzureFan2 chapter 25 . 5/25/2018
Love the fic and hope you continue it even if its just to the end of year 2. Also, I hope you don't suddenly make Jiraiya find a way to Hogwarts without an explanation.
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