Reviews for Harry Daniels and the Order of Shadows Bk 2
TIGGI1 chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Great chapter thanks
mwinter1 chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Nice update. Awaiting more.
Viralic1 chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
This is a pretty good story, and I'm glad to see that you have improved your grammar, and spacing between paragraphs. Quite often in the first story, you would leave things lower case when they need to be capitalized, but you definitely fixed it up pretty well in this story.

I also noticed you left paragraphs quite large in your first story, but this one is much more manageable. Keep up the good work.
agnar chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
For one thing, I don't think harry should waste much time this year forcing snape's behavior. After last year he goes right back to vanishing harry's work? Time for harry to do something more about this problem. Surely he'd actually want snape gone if at all possible, to insure snape doesn't do something to hurt any of his few friends.

To be honest, while I get harry doesn't feel threatened by dumbledore, snape, etc. it gets old that he keeps warning them over and over, but never *really* follows through.

1st year I believe he warned snape about 8 times that he'd seriously hurt him next time he tried to break into harry's mind. But he never does.

Frankly that strikes me as the reason people keep messing with him, because his threats, while backed by actual power and ability, seem hollow because he never really follows through.
Angel Girl5 chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Are the evil Ravenclaws gonna get pranked or something? Something has to be done for what they are doing to Luna...especially Cho and Marietta...

I think you did good with sure would be a shame if an "anonymous" student sent a memory of Snape attacking a student.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
wizmage chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
I like it. I hope you update soon.
S-Wanderer999 chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Well I'm enjoying your series so far and I'm looking forward to reading more.

The part with Luna was nice, although I'm wondering just how close is Harry with the Lovegoods (since if he needs a magical family in Britain at all, can he possibly turn to them)?

As for Lily, I'm going to suggest a way that might allow her and Harry to bond with each other, but it will not be as mother and son (although I think Lily might take it anyways). My idea is based upon the fact that House Potter and House Daniels are basically cousins with each other. Basically the relationship between Lily and Harry would be either one of cousins (with differing ages), or one were it's an aunt/nephew relationship. Although Lily would have to work hard to make sure she wouldn't slip and call Harry her son, but considering the fact that she respects his wishes to be called Daniels and not Potter, she hopefully wouldn't slip up too much. And now the biggest problem arises and that would be how Lily would be given such a chance by Harry (my thoughts are to have her start passing messages to Harry through Flitwick about Dumbledore's actions, since she's unaware of Hogwarts spying for Harry).

I left James, Remus, and Sirius out of the part with Lily because for at least James and Remus, they still value Dumbledore's opinion too much. Well I like Sirius, right now he's being too loyal to Dumbledore, and not even thinking of everything Harry has accused him of. I mean no one has questioned Dumbledore on the fact that he planned to take away another person's magic and transfer it to someone else (that sounds like it could be a dark ritual to me). And due to the nature of the planned offense, no matter a person's status, those involved should be questioned (or forced to swear an oath that the accusations are false on their magic, if they don't want veritaserum).
AladdinIRL chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Can't wait for more.

You are an amazing writer.
AladdinIRL chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Can't wait for more.

You are an amazing writer.
Penny is wise chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
Awesome chapters so far.
topdog19 chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
please update going into withdraw
917brat chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
wow this is really good and I am so glade that I checked you homepage here and found this after finsihing the first one. I really can't wait to see what you have planned next because so far I really love how you have both Harry and I really like how you have Luna and had Harry saving her mother.
Smithback chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
rainbowmonFTW chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
You are doing fantastic with this story. I found this story and just had to to go to the first one to read the whole thing.

You definitely do not disappoint, my friend! I must, however, beg for more of your hilarious and clever pranks.

I love this story, the only problem is that it is still far too short for my liking! :D


TIGGI1 chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
Excellent looking forward to more
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