Reviews for Poetic Arda
Sophia the Scribe chapter 30 . 7/15
Another great job! Poor Maedhros...bound to follow in his father's fiery fate. (Ha, alliteration for the win...). I especially liked the third, fourth, and last stanzas. Keep it up!
Blessings,
Sophia
Sophia the Scribe chapter 29 . 7/15
Lovely job!
Sophia
HeartoftheArtsari chapter 28 . 4/8
Wonderful! Really enjoyed these poems! ;)
HeartoftheArtsari chapter 14 . 4/8
You've painted a mural far and wide with these poems . . . and it has been utterly compelling and beautifully skilled! :)
mrspencil chapter 24 . 12/6/2014
Another lovely set of verses
I am so glad I stumbled across your writing:-)
Mrs P:-)
mrspencil chapter 19 . 12/6/2014
Sad, but beautifully penned:-)
mrspencil chapter 17 . 12/6/2014
A vivid description of the marshes, the repetition works well.
mrspencil chapter 15 . 12/6/2014
Particularly impressed with this poem...:-)
mrspencil chapter 14 . 12/6/2014
Again, you pick your subjects very well to fit the poem form:-)
mrspencil chapter 13 . 12/6/2014
The weaving subject works very well with the woven pattern of the pantoum:-)
mrspencil chapter 12 . 12/6/2014
And you kept to the sonnet form very well...such a poignant poem...perfect for a sonnet.
mrspencil chapter 9 . 12/6/2014
Interesting pattern...gives it a quick and fleeting feel
mrspencil chapter 5 . 12/6/2014
I think this works very well...you follow the form without the sense being overwhelmed.
mrspencil chapter 3 . 12/6/2014
Not tried this type of poem...quite a striking effect:-)
mrspencil chapter 2 . 12/6/2014
I really liked this...rhythm and rhyme really drives the verses on:-)
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