Your theory is one of the most reasonable ones I've heard so far XD

Hi

I'm really excited about your new story, I really loved fate's favorite, I think your writing style is very enjoyable. The way you depict Tom and Harry, especially their dynamic, is amazing :D. I look forward to the next chapters. Do you already know if it will be a long or short fic ?

As for the reason Tom didn't stun Harry in the canon, I think that maybe he wasn't enough 'alive' yet to cast any spell. I don't quite remember but it seems to me that he only wrote his name with the wand so maybe at that moment his magic wasn't powerful enough. Well, it's just my guess. Anyway, I like your version .

And I'm happy to see that you didn't give up on fanfiction yet.

See you soon! :)

I'm so excited about this story! Completely agree on how if Tom was so brilliant, why not just stun him like he did here! Can't wait to read this story! And I really like the title!

great first chapter, I'm already hooked :) i love your writing style and how you portray the brilliance of Tom and don't make Harry out to be some fool. It'll be interesting to see how they react to each other because of the age difference. Also, will Ginny live? I have to say that if she dies first off this is definitely setting the fic off to be a bit darker, which i think would be awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter

title idea- deception's duo?

cheers!

AHHHHHHHHH What a delicious surpise!

I expected something completely differend but I'm anything but disapointed... Way more sensible than the book...

PS I'm not that sure the court is still out for FF :P

A new story, it's brilliant already.

Diary Tom's alternatives are interesting, but naturally this is going to be, hopefully, as good as Fate's Favourite :)

this sure seems interesting

LOVED IT. Please do continue with this, your writing is flawless and the idea of this has been, to be honest, one of the plot bunnies I've had gnawing away at my brain too, so it's nice to see it actualized...really well. I know this isn't FF but...they're still the same characters at the end of the day, no? Well. Especially Tom anyway. Even though this isn't FF, your characterization of him is amazing so please don't...change that too much. I can't wait how Tom and a younger Harry are going to - ah, get along. Oh, and thank you thank you thank you for being one of the very few non-slash Harry/Tom writers. I love their platonic relationship and slash makes me cringe.

I am little bit unsure about this story but I love the title. So far so good. I am looking forward to see how this will play out.

I hope you update soon

Well, interesting beginning. Hope you update soon.

Wow. I simply adored fate's favorite, and I can't wait to see how this turns out! Will the relationship between Tom and Harry be like the one they had in Fate's favorite?