|Reviews for Mars and Venus|
| Graveygraves chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
Try as he might, he hadn't yet found much to admire about Erin Strauss.
It is the little lines like this one that you just drop in that make your stories so much more. The tension and dialogue is amazing and totally in character.
| Graveygraves chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Can only read one chapter tonight but I will be back for more - great idea having Derek going to JJ (that must have been hard for him)
| nebula2 chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
Loved how JJ talked some sense into Morgan. That was nice to read. Also, I like your JJ. You make her still seem human. Her calling Morgan a coward - nice way to get him to own up to his feelings. I was cheering for her there.
And I might get hit for this, but what JJ is saying about Morgan not realizing his feelings for Pen is exactly like the JJ/Will bit. JJ just needs to get over her fear of commitment and realize how much she loves him - if she didn't she never would have agreed to wear that birthstone ring and live with him for so long. All the while reading this I kept thinking of how well it would fit those too...is it safe to come out yet?
and this was actually chapter two but my favorite line: "Describing his feelings for Kevin Lynch was harder than getting Reid to admit he was wrong" - wonderful comparison!
| nebula2 chapter 2 . 3/27/2012
So, I bug you for the rest and then take this long to review...I feel like such a horrible reader.
On the plus side - this was wonderful! I liked how you portrayed the Kevin/Morgan relationship. It fit with the scene from the ep(which I laughed so hard watching). I also liked how you managed to relate the events of the episode without boring the readers. Even if someone had missed the episode they would be able to follow the story.
| delia cerrano chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
Love your writing style...Love your stories...but I'm having a hard, really hard time seeing Morgan & Garcia together - teasing flirting friends but more than that?
| CMCrazies chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
i loved this !
| mummacass chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
JJ nevermind hitting MOrgan in the head with a hammer, you seriously need a 2x4 with nails in the end of it to do the job properly! the man is an idiot!
| Claire Randall Fraser chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
You're killing me! How are you going to end there and leave me hanging like this? I mean, COME ON. Derek and Penelope need to pull their heads from their butts and get this party started. More please. I don't want to beg but I will. lol
| Lurker760 chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
I still don't see Morgan and Garcia as a couple, never will. He did the right thing here however, it's not his decision to make for her and he went to find someone who could give her advice.
I'm not too fond of Garcia at the moment the whole 'I thought you slept with me when I was drunk' thing seriously bothered me.
| jenny crum chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
Great ending, you could see what torment Derek was going through, he loves Pen and wants to be with her but he is afraid that she doesn't want him, he is afraid that she is happy with Kevin, and if she is he doesn't want to take that away from her.
I soooo love Derek and Pen together, they totally rock as a couple and I can't wait to read more of your stories.
| Lenika08 chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
vamos derek dinos que le has dicho!
| Flowerfairy30 chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
I almost feel sorry for Derek, almost. He made some of this trouble himself. That was a great chapter.
| Toni Michelle chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
Damnit Derek WHAT did you say? LOL
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
| delia cerrano chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
Good chapter & and a great cliffhanger but I still like Garcia with Kevin..sorry. To me they are a set. Going to read anyway in hope of a surprise when Morgan speaks finally and because I like your writing.
| Monnie32 chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
ugh, cliffy, I wanna know what he said to her!