Reviews for The Third Salvatore
Aurora92 chapter 8 . 1/3/2013
Yes! I knew there was something wrong with Henry. And I like that this is basically a parody of all the fanfiction where Damon and Stefan have suddenly a brother/sister who is amazing, the most beautiful, can do anything, knows everything, perfect... a Mary Sue/Gary Stue.
Did you have in mind this twist the whole time? You certainly had the idea in the last chapter, that's for sure.
In all honesty, until now I saw this as one of all these stupid fanfictions where the author makes everyone OOC and use the fanfiction as an opportunity to bash on the characters he/she doesn't like. Now, though, it seems that you are actually making fun of this tendency.
xXPrincess-of-DarknessxXx chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Please update this Story i cant wait anymore pleeeeeaaaassseeeee !
Bamonislove chapter 9 . 9/4/2012
Please update I love it!
EvaMedina chapter 9 . 8/24/2012
Aaaaaaaaaaah! Update ASAP!
I just found your story, and it is very funny! I'm sure you really hate Stefan. I laught a lot when I read the chapter when he's crying a lot for his little lovely love. Hahahaha
Well, to sum up, I like you story. Keep writing, please.
xXPrincess-of-DarknessxXx chapter 9 . 8/24/2012
Like it :) keep it up
xXPrincess-of-DarknessxXx chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
Wow that was unexpected anyways love your Story And i Hope bamon And Stelena Too please update ASAP !
Guest chapter 8 . 8/7/2012
Please make this bamon and stelena! I love this story! Omg
ksbg chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Cant believe that not only you've written about lost but you've also written about vampire diaries!? this is amazing and those are my favorite tv shows ever!, maybe someday you'll write some once upon a time fic and i will fall in love with you all over again! hahaha, amazing!
MEB chapter 7 . 6/25/2012
Please write an 8th part

I need more benry!
LittleVillain chapter 6 . 6/13/2012
I usually don't like fanfiction with OC but this is really well written. No grammatical errors and you describe really well how they feel. There are some things that I don't like (like Elena being mean to someone that she knows loves her- she never did with Matt after all in the books-. She isn't THAT selfish. Or the fact that everyone- except Stefan, heh! I loved that! He seems to be the only one to remember that Matt is his a friend- is mean to poor Matt. Even Bonnie! And talking about Bonnie: isn't she still with Zander? In the first chapter she was thinking about breaking up with him but I din't see her actually do it. She just practically throwed hersel to a guy while still being in a relationship with another? Yes, she did that in the books- and that wasn't right either- but it was because those weren't real relationship. The thing with Zander was serious instead. And it' s interesting that she is mad at Elena because she said Damon and Stefan are insane when n the first chapter she agreed with her and when she thinks the same thing about poor Matt.) but you did put as a genre "humour" so I'm willing to not thinking about it too much. Anyway I'm curios about what's gonna happen now.
Jess chapter 5 . 6/9/2012
They are all so out of character lol

Stefan and Damon should just "bitch slap" Elena and move on.


ShyVibrant chapter 5 . 4/14/2012
Wow. I never really liked Elena. She being such a bitch in this makes me dislike her all the more. Though, I doubt Stefan would cry over a break up. Or maybe thats just me.

Anyways, I hope Henry stays with Bonnie and doesn't be swayed by Elena. He deserves better.

Update soon :)
hopelessdream2005 chapter 5 . 3/23/2012
Ah! Getting more exciting can't wait for the next ch update soon!
hopelessdream2005 chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Lol Matt and his food! Wow Elena is so mean. This story is so funny so far can't wait to see what happens next
hopelessdream2005 chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
i cant help but like your portrayal of the characters, and Damon and Stefan competing is hillarious, still got my attention so far and cant wait to see what happens next
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