|Reviews for Quest for Camelot ReWrite|
| Maddie chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
This is quiet good. My siblings and I re-watched the movie for fun since we remembered it from our childhood and we felt like parts could have been better. I'm a terrible writer and I had hoped I might find a rewrite here. What do you know, I found your story, and I could never have changed it as good as you have.
| I'mAGarrettFan chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
I love your interpretation of Devon and Cornwall, better than the movie. I quite enjoy the movie very much however this rendition is close to how I have actually imagined it. Spot on! I'm pretty sure that he stays blind at the end in the movie or else he'd be reigning the horse that they ride off on I would think. I Greatly appreciate you making Kayley not so stupid. The movie version I just want to punch in the face. When Juliana tells her she can't go get Excalibur and asks "What would you do?" My usual response is 'Give that child (because she Certainly does not act like a 20yrold) a good spanking!' And I appreciate that the magic leaves aren't So magic. The whole 'Oh, look, I'm all better' thing just doesn't cut it. And yes, Garrett is wounded by the big guy with the arrows for hands. Great explanation on the griffin! Awesome! Loved this one!
| A chapter 11 . 11/2/2013
Very good story. I like how you incorporated so much of the different versions into your story, whether you already knew of them or researched it, I commend that. I've always really liked this movie, but as I get older I feel that it needs more drama. It's nice to see that others feel the same way. You're a good writer, thank you for this story.
| Ranoko chapter 11 . 10/26/2013
Fantastic! You really did a beautiful job getting this all together. You wrapped it up wonderfully, and ithank you/i for addressing a few things. Notably Garrett.
I like how you kept Devon and Cornwall separate too. :3
I really enjoyed the end bit with the witches - great job! It's nice to have some resolution there.
Thank you for finishing this - it is wonderful!
| monkeymouse7906 chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS WILL YOU MAKE A SEQUEL TO IT. I HAVE ALWAYS WONDERED TOO IF GARRETT GOT HIS EYESIGHT BACK BECAUSE I SAW THIS TOO IN THE MOVIE. BUT WITH THE STORIES I'M WRITING I WANT TO KEEP HIM THE WAY I KNOW HE IS/WAS FOR THE WHOLE MOVIE.
| Avenger09 chapter 10 . 10/15/2013
One question... Have you seen the Nostalgia Critic's Review of this movie?
| Ranoko chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
This is barking fantastical! You have really done amazingly with this; it's still the story, but... in written story form! I know that seems redundant, but you should know what I mean. You really have done a wonderful job thus far, I get really into it every time I read. Thank you for putting forth the effort, and your results have been fantastic thus far!
I look forward to updates! Good luck.
| monkeymouse7906 chapter 10 . 10/7/2013
wow i loved what you added on. are you going to add more. please do so.
| WyldClaw chapter 9 . 10/5/2013
That was an amazing chapter! That part about ruber killing kayley where he killed her dad made my spine tingle
Go Devon and Cornwall ! Use your new firepower to roast ruber
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/30/2013
Please please finish the camelot story!
| Inki Feathers chapter 6 . 8/17/2013
Nicely-paced chapter. Really seeing the relationship betwem Kayley and the dragons unfold. Quite like Garrett and Kayley's relationship so far as well-not rushed either.
| Inki Feathers chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
I see that Kayley is bringing out a nurturing side through her treatment of Devon and Cornwall. I like the interaction between her and the dragons and how their devotion towards her as their "name giver" develops .
Ruber's quite beastly in this version, and I liked how you developed his thoughts. And the way he tore through that dragon meat...ferocious...
| Inki Feathers chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
I like how you managed to sum up the "I Stand Alone" song into a brief explanation-I can see some foreshadowing given what happens later in the movie (specifically Garrett). Also liked how you managed to tie back Kayley's mother into the story and giving Kayley a solid reason to Garrett about coming along.
Speaking of which, interesting that you examined Kayley's decision to go into the Forbidden Forest-to me it adds to the pride and tenacity that is part of her character.
| Inki Feathers chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
Kaylee's characterization definitely has more spunk-she reminds me a bit of similar spirited heroines I've read in books. Just an obervation.
Her relationship with her mother is much rockier, which given a greater sense of conflict in Kaylee's mind. Not sure if the movie played this out to an extent, but their interaction is written well.
Adding Edward was a good change, and in my opinion, the changes make me as a reader more invested in him. I wonder what will happen to him later.
Descriptions of scenes were great on the whole. Not sure if I'd describe Kaylee's reaction to the dress the way you did, though, as I'd think she'd be more terrified of a snake about to attack her than repulsed.
So far so good!
| Inki Feathers chapter 2 . 8/12/2013
You made an interesting addition to the story through the use of the Gray Sisters. It certainly helps answers the question that many people who had problems with this film had, which was where exactly the potion came from. Liked how you incorporated the griffin as well. I wonder if the sisters' longing for the "old ways" will become crucial in later chapters of the story.
I'm also wondering if the Forbidden Forest will somehow have the "old ways" story line playing a part in some way in later chapters.
The pacing for this chapter is very good,