|Reviews for Quest for Camelot ReWrite|
| wolfgoddess1990 chapter 11 . 6/2
can you add an epilog for their wedding and maybe even kids.
| sildarmillion chapter 11 . 10/17/2016
Whoa, I'd marked this story out ages ago, and then completely forgot to come and read it! Fortunately, now that I did notice this in the list of stories I marked as "follow" but never actually read, it turns out it's actually been completed (and not abandoned, liked all the others on the list, lol).
But seriously though, of all the Nostalgia Critic's reviews, Quest for Camelot is probably still my favorite. I mean I loved the movie as a child (for some reason) and still have a soft spot for it, but that review was hilarious ("Do they speak horn?")
I remember trying to watch it again when I was older and I found Devon and Cornwall so obnoxious I couldn't understand how I could stand to watch the movie on repeat as a child. And I thought you did a good job with them! (If I was following along, I actually would have voted to leave them out, but now seeing what you did with them, I think this works pretty well.)
Also, when rewatching it, I was surprised that Garrett didn't get his sight back because of the few things that I did remember about the movie from my childhood, I could swear he got his eyesight back and he looked at Kayleigh and was like "I can see!" I must have imagined it?
I totally did not see that twist with Aydn coming though...but it was a cool idea and you built it up really well!
I enjoyed this! Definitely filled in many of the holes. (Including the witches from Macbeth was also a cool idea!) Although the Critic would probably still be complaining about the Forest, he seemed to be really upset by why the Forest was "alive" if I remember correctly. OK, now I want to go find that review and watch it again. XD
| JazzQueen chapter 11 . 7/31/2016
Man, this is a much better movie than what Warner Brothers churned out. You should also do a rewrite of the Warner Brother's animated version of the King and I.
| WyldClaw chapter 6 . 6/11/2015
Oh no! Poor garret
| Shiori Kudo chapter 3 . 4/23/2015
The line should be "I'll transform the meek and sickly into iron men, with hands of steel.".
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/2/2014
Great story! Will there be a sequel?
| Mytho-G chapter 11 . 7/10/2014
I have to be honest, I love this more than the movie. Don't get me wrong, I still love the movie (especially the songs), but your rewrite holds more realistic aspects that the film couldn't portray-gives it more of that "Tales of King Arthur" feel. I've read it at least two times already and plan to read it again tonight.
I especially enjoy the format you used, very well written and in great transition from film to written word.
As for the twists you've added in (quite smoothly, I might add) I absolutely love. An excellent job on the whole, I will be reading this for as long as it is up. :)
| TsukiyoTenshi chapter 11 . 3/30/2014
If I may say, I've watched the film many times, but I've never heard it told quite like this. Very well done and very well written with wonderful incorporation of the actual myths and legends.
| Maddie chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
This is quiet good. My siblings and I re-watched the movie for fun since we remembered it from our childhood and we felt like parts could have been better. I'm a terrible writer and I had hoped I might find a rewrite here. What do you know, I found your story, and I could never have changed it as good as you have.
| I'mAGarrettFan chapter 11 . 11/25/2013
I love your interpretation of Devon and Cornwall, better than the movie. I quite enjoy the movie very much however this rendition is close to how I have actually imagined it. Spot on! I'm pretty sure that he stays blind at the end in the movie or else he'd be reigning the horse that they ride off on I would think. I Greatly appreciate you making Kayley not so stupid. The movie version I just want to punch in the face. When Juliana tells her she can't go get Excalibur and asks "What would you do?" My usual response is 'Give that child (because she Certainly does not act like a 20yrold) a good spanking!' And I appreciate that the magic leaves aren't So magic. The whole 'Oh, look, I'm all better' thing just doesn't cut it. And yes, Garrett is wounded by the big guy with the arrows for hands. Great explanation on the griffin! Awesome! Loved this one!
| A chapter 11 . 11/2/2013
Very good story. I like how you incorporated so much of the different versions into your story, whether you already knew of them or researched it, I commend that. I've always really liked this movie, but as I get older I feel that it needs more drama. It's nice to see that others feel the same way. You're a good writer, thank you for this story.
| Ranoko chapter 11 . 10/26/2013
Fantastic! You really did a beautiful job getting this all together. You wrapped it up wonderfully, and ithank you/i for addressing a few things. Notably Garrett.
I like how you kept Devon and Cornwall separate too. :3
I really enjoyed the end bit with the witches - great job! It's nice to have some resolution there.
Thank you for finishing this - it is wonderful!
| ElsaTheSnowQueen2 chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS WILL YOU MAKE A SEQUEL TO IT. I HAVE ALWAYS WONDERED TOO IF GARRETT GOT HIS EYESIGHT BACK BECAUSE I SAW THIS TOO IN THE MOVIE. BUT WITH THE STORIES I'M WRITING I WANT TO KEEP HIM THE WAY I KNOW HE IS/WAS FOR THE WHOLE MOVIE.
| Avenger09 chapter 10 . 10/15/2013
One question... Have you seen the Nostalgia Critic's Review of this movie?
| Ranoko chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
This is barking fantastical! You have really done amazingly with this; it's still the story, but... in written story form! I know that seems redundant, but you should know what I mean. You really have done a wonderful job thus far, I get really into it every time I read. Thank you for putting forth the effort, and your results have been fantastic thus far!
I look forward to updates! Good luck.