|Reviews for Desperate|
| Cadid423 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Okay, confession. This is a review that I made sure to come back and write about two days after I read this story, because I'm trying to be better about reviewing the stories I read. I really like this one-shot because your version of Narcissa holds many of the same beliefs the one in my head-canon does. :) A beautiful piece!
| Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Although this is short, you do very well in getting the point, and the feelings across. Narcissa really does love Draco; you see it at the end of book seven too. Maybe she isn't ready for outright defiance of Voldemort yet... but she will be.
This is very well written, and a unique perspective.
I like the the tidbits about how she was alone, and how those she had cared about left. I would have liked to see a little more of that. Otherwise, though, this was perfect. Spot on.
| Queen Riza chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Wow that's really good! I loved how you showed Narcissa's devotion to her son; it was very in character. I have one question though. How do you make those lovely little dividers? I can't figure out how!