Reviews for He Is Not One of Us |
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![]() ![]() Must say this is one of the better fics I found. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I forgot to make myself invisible to the dragon I'm robbing. |
![]() ![]() Meh, not worth finishing this unfinished tale. The story starts without a beginning, just a Harry that is overpowered, dark, and trusts Severus within the first two chapters with less than 2 maybe 3 weeks of his name coming from the goblet. No true background or real reason. The dialog and perspectives confirm that the change is 180 degrees from norm and that only the griffindor reaction prior to start is different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize it's been a number of years since you've worked on this story, and there's no chastisement here. Still I wanted to say how very much I like this story. It's a much darker, and seemingly bereft, Harry, and one I could easily see handling the prophecy and then packing up his things and heading off for a new land and new name with his closest friends and allies. And from the developments here, I could see them going with him. It's nice to see a sympathetic Snape, and a 'too little too late' Dumbledore, with a "finally gets a clue" McGonagall, but will it be enough to keep him on Dumbledore's course? I really hope not. Anyway, thanks for a very enjoyable and memorable read thus far. ' |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's been 9 years, where is the rest of the story? |
![]() ![]() I know it is nearly a decade late, but wanted to say how enjoyable I found this story. I hope you are still receiving reviews. I wish you could still find your muse and add to the story, but fully understand. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() Yes do keep this story up it’s a good one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That devil Harry has taken eight years hiding from you. Hopefully a new muse will get you some mojo back and some tendrils of ideas will come to you again! Someday, I hope. I also hope that the end will be good, that Harry stays in the light, at least the gray, and he keeps alive his girl, his buddies, and his wolf uncle and his dogfather. I know it's fanfic cliché, but he needs his family to keep him centered! |
![]() ![]() More it very good |
![]() ![]() Ayo it's been 8 years... You returning any time soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you find your muse soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() 希望有一天你会回来,我会等待。 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update your story soon! |
![]() ![]() Another poor me story a number of writers seem to have fallen in the trap of poor Harry. I would like to see Harry get a hissy fit and to prove that he doesn’t have to take a part in the twittered competition, and Dumbledore getting sacked badly. |