Reviews for Lessons Learned
nagidawn chapter 4 . 4/5/2012
Everytime they say "Oh snaps," I wanna go to Antarctica to club baby seals. I just can't handle that xD They're going through all this mature life stuff like Dawn and they speak like fifth graders, counting out saying retard every once in a while. :3 it's pretty funny xD
Dawn, why would you use a bat ? BATS ARE FOR THE WEAK. USE A CLEAVER, OR A HATCHET :D They cut very nicely into the heads of victims~ C:
See, I knew Barry and Dawn would get together ! I'm taking them home with me~ so cute~! x3
If that man came up to me and asked me if I wanted candy, I'd say, "HELL YEAH." Take it, throw it at him, tell him that pedobear is my husband and then walk away with a pokerface. xD
Rolling Rainbow Star~

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nagidawn chapter 3 . 4/5/2012
I haven't played tag in forever... I know what I'm doing now this summer :D *trollface* So they all had "fun?" OHOHO, I have a sick sick mind... xD And then I have no idea how to play clue, but I've probably played it once in my life... You know what they should play ? Apples to Apples ! BEST. GAME. EVAR. That's where I learned to love spontaneous combustion :D Or... Wait for it... Spontaneous Combusken ;D Is that how you spell its name ? I don't even... *facedesk*
If I were Dawn, I'd take a knife and walk up to her mother chanting "Pop the bubble ! Pop the bubble !" ... Okay, maybe that's a little /too/ far xD I'd love her even more if she actually murdered the guy who got her mom preggers. WOOT.
And Ash's chemistry test should be something like: "Finish this scentence: What I learned in chemistry is..." And then he could write down, "BLANKETY, BLANKETY, BLANK."
Too many spongebob references. I need to go do more productive things.
Rolling Rainbow Star~

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Nopity nope nope nope chapter 5 . 4/3/2012
Great ending. xD It really set aside from the other high school fics.
Hairy Ballsack chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
The great lord Satan demands that I fist you and beastmode in the asses a ton of times and make you guys suck on 't resist child its time to take it like a bitch.
Beastmode953 chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
Dawn has blue hair! Lol I was wondering about that lol. And that was cute. There was a lot of kissing in this chaoter. And you do have a lot of different shippings. Even though I hope it was giovanni Delia rather than Delia and silver. Can't wait for silent but deadly tomorrow.
PichuAuraGuardian18 chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
Well, let's see. Barry's now with Dawn in this story, Dawn wass with Paul in FTaL, Barry and Misty sound like they could be a couple at the end of Duplicity,...Man, so many shippings it's hilarious! Great chapter and story! Sad that it's over, but helps me look forward to your next big thing even more!
KittyAttack chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
Very cute ending. I love how Dawn looks normal now xD

Nice job!
The blue Shaymin chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
bravo shiny gengar bravo (clapping)
reddolphin5000 chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
sooooooo cute! it's over? aw... but it was getting good! you should make a sequel!
Chappetic chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
I have to say, honestly I'm a bit disappointed. This chapter seemed to be more Twinleaf centered, something I expected for like Chapter 4, instead of really beening focused on Advance, which is kind of a bummer but I'm starting to think maybe your whole plan was to secretly plant little Twinleaf seeds in us all 8O

Regardless I hate seeing this fic end. I think it had potential to possibly be a bit longer, say 7 or so chapters maybe? What I really enjoyed was the interaction between everyone. Berry made me laugh a lot as did Dawn and as someone that doesn't care much for their characters at All, in general, this is an accomplishment.

I kinda Do hope you do something like this again, but seeing how you dont really find it to be one of your better works I'll try not to get my hopes up

Doesn't mean i can't dream though 0:)
TheWinterBabe chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
Twinleafshipping's growing on me two... I loved this chapter and you're right, it was kinda corny :P That's okay though!

My fave part was reaction of Dawn's major makeover! It was really realistic, and humorous.

And last but certainly not the least...

Yin-Yang Yoh chapter 5 . 4/2/2012
So. The end of this fic, was a very playful one, until Gary showed up. This is the end right? Slap the "completed" thing and stuff? Either way, 5/5!
KittyAttack chapter 4 . 4/2/2012
Gah I'm so late in reading/reviewing xD

I actually like this. At first I didn't like Dawn, but now I've grown to enjoy her. Especially with Barry xD
Yin-Yang Yoh chapter 4 . 3/30/2012
This...was...amazing. MOST INTERESTED IN THIS FIC NOW! Never expected anything less from my Advanceshipping's Triforce of Wisdom!(if u are confused, check my profile and look for a section called triforce of pairings). 5/5!
PichuAuraGuardian18 chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
I read this earlier, but just now got time to review it! It was a great chapter! I'm sad that it's almost over, but that just means that we're even closer to your next big thing! I can't wait to find out what the secret is! Keep up the awesome work and update soon!
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