|Reviews for Lessons Learned|
| PichuAuraGuardian18 chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
I read this earlier, but just now got time to review it! It was a great chapter! I'm sad that it's almost over, but that just means that we're even closer to your next big thing! I can't wait to find out what the secret is! Keep up the awesome work and update soon!
| Hairy Ballsack chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
beastmode you pussy apologize to Doug already or i'll get you be trippin and your punkass is gonna get got.
| Chappetic chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
Soo close to the ENDDDDD ;_;
Just curious, will you be making an alternate version of this story but more Twinleaf focused? Cuz I actually wouldn't mind reading it.
| Hawk2012 chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
I enyoyed readinf the chapter looking forward to the next update
| Beastmode953 chapter 4 . 3/29/2012
I love dawn with the baseball bat! And you did just great. I could envision dawns neighborhood perfectly so your description was perfect. Even if it was months ago its still a lot better than my return rewrite...since maybe cuz I didn't try lol. And I saw in anearlier chapter that dawn had black hair and now johanna has blue hair. Was that a mistake? Besides that no complaints. Can't wait for the next one
| PichuAuraGuardian18 chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
Great chapter! Loved every bit of it! Can't wait until the next one! Although, it raises the question: How does one die from ice cream? Hmm...Anyways, Update soon!
| Yin-Yang Yoh chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
Game on man! This was AWESOME EVEN THOGUH THINGS ARE TOO OOC FOR THEIR DEAR LIVES! !~
| reddolphin5000 chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
I love this story! It's cute! has a little drama but that's what makes a story exciting! I cannot wait for the next chapter! I also love how Barry's afraid of germs... A classic! :)
| Beastmode953 chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
This is no doubt my favorite fic from you. And Damn looks like there's some Barry and dawn in this. You really know how to make a character evil lol. Garys such an asshole lol
| nagidawn chapter 2 . 3/24/2012
Dawn spoke words never meant to be spoken by a teenager ? CHALLENGE ACCEPTED.
CHALLENGE COMPLETED. MISSION ACCOMPLISHED. xD Pfft, that's like a normal "hello" and "goodbye" in my school. The most foul languaged place I've ever been to so far :3
D'aaaaaaaw, this is how the love always begins~ the jock and the nerd. The betrayal then the forgivness... And then more betrayal :D then I laugh. xD Gary's such a jerk omg o.o I can soon see Misty fitting in here... I can just feel her gingerly presence...
So May slapped Ash and kicked him in the balls ? xD WINNING~ I would've walked in and said, "I'm here to chew bubble gum and kick a$s... But I'm all out of bubble gum... And I'm all out of a$s."
Rolling Rainbow Star~
| TheCreatures chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
I swear I'm starting to get jealous because I can't think of any cool and perfect ideas like you. Keep updating! The story is perfect!
| Yin-Yang Yoh chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Not much to say here either. 4/5
| Beastmode953 chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Can't tell you how much I'm loving this. Things are definitely changing and may now plays board ganesh with max and has fun and I almost cried when dawn talked about getting abused by her moms boyfriend and how she's never eaten like that before. In hoping to get more from dawn but this is an advanceshipping fic and I love everything about it becaue
| PichuAuraGuardian18 chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Geez, we just go from May and Dawn hating Ash, to being his friend, to hating him all over again. Well, hopefully Ash will find a way to get them to forgive him again. Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
| Beastmode953 chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Really? You scare me Gengar. We think so much alike. I was going to do the same thing with my stories and man I love how creative you are. Dawn is hilstious and I sense some cavaliershipping in this unless Paul makes an appearance. Great job. I'll definitely check out what else you have but the Damn updates don't come in. Keep it up.