|Reviews for Whip and Wing|
| rajahsipad chapter 12 . 1/27
a sequel please?
| ROC95 chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
This is interesting.
| thebluninja chapter 11 . 4/29/2013
Please tell me that Sprocket is named after the dog from Fraggle Rock. Because that's an awesome intersection of geekery.
Also, no sequal? After you set this up as a freaking serial cliffhanger? *Clearly* the sequal is Ahuizotl getting into the human world to seek his revenge. :p
| thebluninja chapter 10 . 4/29/2013
I want a patch now, for the #405 Deathtrap and Ancient Ruin Defense Maintenance Union. Seriously. Get someone to draw this.
| thebluninja chapter 9 . 4/29/2013
Yay! Death and destruction! Death to Nazis and cultists alike!
| thebluninja chapter 8 . 4/29/2013
Sarcastically: Gosh, what a shock. I was totally not expecting the treachery from both sides.
Seriously, that is probably the most overused trope in the Indy movies. I guess it's better than surviving a nuke in a fridge, though.
| thebluninja chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
Yay, Indy and Daring have picked up their respective sidekicks! Something tells me Flint would like Brooks. Especially with a little barbeque sauce.
| thebluninja chapter 3 . 4/27/2013
OK, how does Jagerbomber know Do's name? She didn't introduce herself anywhere that I saw. And is Indy going to get an equal dream to her life in Equestria?
| thebluninja chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
Interesting take. I actually figured you were just making a comment that the moons of Equestria and Earth didn't look the same (different impact patterns or something). Not surprised that money gets the inn-keeper moving, but I am a little surprised that Indy didn't try waving around paper money first - it is the standard, after all.
| HoboDash chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
| Seanchow806Napoleonic chapter 12 . 9/24/2012
No Sequels?! That is messing with my will of my three values! You do not have any plans for the sequel do you?! Say no sequels! I am a military historian and I use soldiers' words! I am not a fool, when I asked to put my neck into a noose! whilst my enemies and criminals are conspiring against me!
| Cuffy Meigs chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Most entertaining. The swaping worlds seems to be original. I would however, say that you seem to have placed a couple of anachronisms.
1. Ms. I believe started in the 70's
2. Seatbelts were not used in the 30's in cars or trucks.
I especially liked the epilog
| Major Simi chapter 11 . 4/3/2012
ah well looks like both adventurers are in their right home and place whit what they wanted. well done especially as daring pumelled the guy who's responsible for the trapps. well done
| Feldoran chapter 12 . 4/3/2012
Ha! Loved it, especially the twist with Lyra and Dash there at the end. Best of luck with any future endeavors and I can honestly say I don't know if I would even want a sequel but whatever youdo I would probably love.
Thanks for a great story!
| D48 chapter 10 . 4/1/2012
This was some very nice work even if I could see you hurrying Indy and Daring back together a little bit. I was honestly hoping you would send Indy to Canterlot and Daring to America because the reactions would have been hilarious. The one bit I was particularly hoping to see was some American soldiers rescuing Daring and thinking she was just a cute pet for a bit after she fell out of the plane, but you cut that one off before the end of the chapter.
Beyond that the villain deaths were a lot of fun, and trap maintenance pony was a great touch (although it would have come off as deus ex machina if you had not set it up with the joke in chapter 1).