Reviews for The Smarty Mart Adventure's with Ron & Steve
only-looking chapter 2 . 2/17/2015
Aw, this was great fun, and a nice look into a part of the show we never got to see enough of. The best part is that it could have been an actual episode. The plot and dialogue were spot-on, everybody was in character, and I can totally see Ron calling up Kim just to prove that they were dating.

Poor Mr. Barkin, almost having to get married to a chimpanzee for a second time. Having Rufus be Short Round was a nice touch.

The only nit I could pick: I can't believe you missed the chance to have Ron say "Why did it have to be monkeys?"

I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what comes next.
CajunBear73 chapter 2 . 2/16/2015
And only in Smarty Mart could an adventure like that one take place...

But with characters from one whacky sitcom to spice things up.

Man, Barkin's got issues, it's a wonder he got past the psyche exam to get into MHS as a Teacher/Administrator...

Still, keep 'em coming, Ron makes a pretty good foil/straight-man for Steve's brand of Straight Man...

CB73
The Arcticourt Spellwright chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Let me be blunt: I have never laughed more in my life without the aid of Mel Brooks. Even as a oneshot, this is a goldmine!
Indri08 chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
This is hilarious! Please update soon!
zzzoo99 chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
keep up the great work
QueenCobraWing chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
I love this! It's so funny! And you really have captured the style of humor of the show, the way things keep coming back, the way past traumatic incidents should never be explained. Also, the way the characters talk is extremely accurate. You have perfectly imitated the certain parts of a sentence Mr. B yells, the way Kim calls Ron sarcastic nicknames, the way Monique pauses throughout her sentences. Oh, I love it!
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Happy B'day to your Sis, for starters...

Nice fleshing out of Ron's and Steve's involvement in that Episode after the future Star Employee got that job with Smarty Mart.

It's too bad the series didn't explore further Steve's foibles since that episode. But they had Kim and Ron to check into.

And we have you for more of what came our way.

Have fun and see ya next time.

CB73