|Reviews for Encounters|
| ghostlyangel chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
I'm really liking this story so far. Poor Ace alone in a room with a hottie, well not even a room, a BED! Yikes.
I've worked kitchens before (though maybe not a rustic one as such) and your detail of what goes on in one was good. I could so picture it. Piles of plates and a oven that won't work right. haha. Been there, done that.
Looking forward to see what happens next :) Thanks for the update. And I just realized it's only Wednesday. You are spoiling us!
| Ysaye chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
Oh, Ace finally got caught in his eat-and-run... looking forward to how he'll do as a part-time worker.
I personally thought with the heavy drinking habits of the Whitebeards they'd probably have their own brewery on board. Or abducted a skilled brewer to build up one. Might make another nice FF... ;-)
| AceIsTheOnly chapter 2 . 3/25/2012
Poor people who died. I like how you describe Ace here! I also like the girls name. What a lovely name! :D
| Tigereye13 chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
Well, at least Ace realized that he was tricked, and as a man of his word he won't quite. Just get lost.
I think Tool is an odder name than Lazue, personally. Though I wonder what the chief's name is.
I like the shifting around of OCs. It gives a nice feel to the story.
| lilyoftheval5 chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
Really intriguing since I have no idea how you'll develop this...
| Writing bunny chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
| Tigereye13 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I really like the fact that you take the time to build up your OC a bit and show some of her personality. A lot of people that put an OC in don't seem to do it that often or focus mainly on what they are wearing, to the point were I end up scratching my head going, "Why should I care about this character?" There are really just three other stories that I have found in this section of fan fiction that I can actually enjoy the OCs.
I think Whitebread would be shaking his head at what Ace has gotten himself into and hit him for good measure. Whitebread after all seems to believe in a bit of tough love when needed. And Ace letting himself get tricked into working off a debt instead of just leaving would probably be one of those moments.
Oh, just wondering, is this set in the world of One Piece or an AU? I think it is the world of One Piece but I just want to make sure.
| HeartOfNewcastle chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
great story! LOVE how ur getting ace to work for her lol! keep it up cuz i want more .
| Rio chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Very interesting start. I hope to read more.
| ghostlyangel chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
That was a great first chapter. I normally don't like OC-centric stories, but this one looks fun. Of course, coming from you, I knew it would be good even before I started. That was a very good viewpoint of "Asce" from a 3rd party perspective. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
| Teruul chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Uhuhuu, now this looks promising! This is you Ace/OC story, yes? I've never really been fond of pairing characters with OC's, but since it was you, of course I read it. And now, I'm glad I did :D This has certainly captured my interest, it seems like it could become something really cool :3
Bhahah, how Lazue connected Ace's name with the word ass, it made me giggle xD And Ace's leisure attitude makes it all the more fun, I loved the comment "I'm a pirate, it's what I do."
Can't wait for more!