Reviews for We're going to be Friends
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Continue. I'm not happy.
WaterEra chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Heey, this is good! :D It has a cool, teenage vibe to it that I really catch. You project this girl pretty well. She appears to be quite laid back, very non Mary Sue, which is great. She seems like a hip, cool girl. It'd be great to see more of her character come through. She's also quite humorous at moments. :P On the topic of qualities, you portray Napoleon wonderfully. XD You have his personality down to a T. I don't know how to explain it, it's just great.
Your writing is done very well. It's smooth, projects emotion well, and has a consistent speed and sentence frame to it. But I suggest you write out full paragraphs more often instead of having each line on the left hand side. It'd create more fluency in that way, since normally that mechanism is only used in dialogue. As well as give you more room to write. You impressively well express events without a lot of detail, and that is something not easily done. On the other hand, I say don't be afraid to add in a lot of detail. Detail can be good. :P
All in all, I'm reeaallly liking where this is going. I can tell you love the movie and you've studied it lol. XD Which is fantastic. This will be a wonderful story with your fatuation for this film, because with that you will be able to write it honestly and with heart and purpose, instead of flimsily like some do. This story will be awesome. :D :D
However, I see you have not updated since this chapter. :/ Luckily, that's not TOO long ago. I say this: Continue this story. It is already wonderful. And it doesn't matter how many reviews you get. My story gets over a thousand and only like 7 people have reviewed it. It's a great story and someone out there will love it. Like me lol. XD You have the chance to make this a full fledged, pure story because of how much of a dedicated fan you are. Even if not a whole ton of people review it, you will still have fulfilled it. If you still have doubts, how about this. I always give nice, long reviews with plenty of detail and thought. LOL So if you write more chapters I'll give you a review adequate for a reviewer for The New York Times. XD XD lol I just really believe you should continue this story, because it's already super cool and awesome. If you see this review, which I hope you do, then...go for it! :D
kruegerfanatic chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Pretty good. Looking forward to new chapter
Angel chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
This is amazing! PLEASE continue it! I absolutely LOVE it! Please, please, please continue!
Pinkie the Butt-Hurter chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
First off, continue you must! Second off, your pen name is one of my nicknames, since my name is Nikki and my friend Renai calls me Nikki Bee...:D
Yvette369 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Wow! That's an interesting take on the movie but I like it! Really cute :) please write more!