Reviews for The Fine Line
bella0609 chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
WOW! What an amazing one-shot! Anyway to make it a multi-shot. Amazing!
guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
Damn this would have made a fantastic story if you had decided to continue it. I would definitely have read it.
Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Fabulous; I'd love to read more!
foxylady1on1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Loved it, you should extend it to a multi chapter story it would make a good one xx
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
wow that was way hotter than i was expecting. wow *thumbsup*
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
What? This story could be so much more i can feel it. Hahah. Please continue!
glitterr chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Oh, I LOVE it! Are you continuing this story?
IndianWalker chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
This would be a great story to continue! :)
Meikela chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Oh - this is so not done. Can't you feel it? It's crying for you to finish... :)
movieandbookgirl chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
That was pretty darn hot. I enjoyed. In fact, this is one of those stories, I'd love to find out what happened. Great job.
afmtoo chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Delicious. Please, please, please continue this!

RPattSinner chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Oh wow. PLEASE continue this story! It was so good!
jeninef chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Oh dear God, please for the love of all that's holy you must continue this story! I loved it! It was hot and awesome...I love strong Bella's and Edward's! So, so good...they'll tear each other apart...I hope we get to find out his personal reasons for marrying her!
penmom chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Would like more of this plot...
vampyregirl86 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
oh yes more of this one too! please please please tell me there is some way for us to KNOW who did it (after the contest obviously) so we can see if they do more :)
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