|Reviews for Dawn, May, & Ash Go Parachuting|
| SuperAdvanceshipper01629 chapter 1 . 6/6
I liked the story but could you stick to the anime, like May saying Max instead of bro. She never said that on the anime Also, instead of cars, why not Pokemon like Charizard or one of his bird Pokemon.
But out of everything, I love your story. Keep it up.
| James-83 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
The same opinion with the other review.
Your history is too americanized and pokemon is from Japan, use more global things.
Don't turn pokemon in another Dragonball Evolution XD
| Itssupereffective chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I never really liked script format, I feel like it takes the emotion away. I don't really understand the fic though, they went parachuting, and it was over. But you have good grammar, spelling, and the fic did at least have a purpose, you'd be suprised at how many fics lack the thing I just listed.
| reddolphin5000 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This is a creative idea! I liked this! You typed this in a script sort of way but it's still good! I've always had a thing for ash and may! I love the pairing!