|Reviews for Dawn, May, & Ash Go Parachuting|
| James-83 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
The same opinion with the other review.
Your history is too americanized and pokemon is from Japan, use more global things.
Don't turn pokemon in another Dragonball Evolution XD
| Itssupereffective chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I never really liked script format, I feel like it takes the emotion away. I don't really understand the fic though, they went parachuting, and it was over. But you have good grammar, spelling, and the fic did at least have a purpose, you'd be suprised at how many fics lack the thing I just listed.
| reddolphin5000 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This is a creative idea! I liked this! You typed this in a script sort of way but it's still good! I've always had a thing for ash and may! I love the pairing!