Reviews for under my facade
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Wow, I love it! And no Victoire, I don't think I've ever written a lily/teddy without Victoire. Impressive :)
Pure Alethea chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
You rocked this LilyTeddy! That utter jerk! I felt so sorry for Lily and just felt like punching Teddy in the face. Hermione'll teach him a thing or two! I loved the last paragraph. 'She just didn't let anyone know what was under that facade'. Loved it. You are a flawless writer! :D

Alethea
sydneysages chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Aww, this was so heartbreaking, Cate! I don't really like anything other than teddyVictoire, for those characters, but you wrote it really nicely, with perfect descriptions and a real feeling of loss and despair!
currents chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
damn, that is heartbreaking! tbqh i have never read a lilyteddydominique before, so points for originality ;)i love the way you told this though, with him seducing her rather than the other way around? that isn't the way teddylily typically goes, in fact, i've never read a manwhore!teddy quite like yours XD

Great work, keep writing!

Always,

Summer
DreamLandXx chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Really good plot :) cant't wait for more