Reviews for Moments to remember
lolyncut chapter 2 . 3/26/2012
Can you make the paragraphs a lot shorter? Usually when someone is talking that's a new line. Also, paragraphs are usually 3-5 sentences long. I'm loving the story, but it shouldn't be such a headache to read.
tazlvr2001 chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
I like this story. Just one little bit of critique. You seem to have Ashley's name in places that should be Emily's.
whoopthereitis321 chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
OH GOD! dont read this while listening to fix you by cold play O_O tears are streaming down my face 3

i loved this :)

it's perfect _

will there be more? or is this it? :]

it would be awesome to see a sequel :D
KeepCalmandKissDrSpencerReid chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
I'm intrigued and I will put this story on my subscriptions and favorites!
lolyncut chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Great beginning, but when I tried to get to chapter two, a can't be found message came up. I'll put you on alert, but am not hopeful. This site can be a bear sometimes.