Reviews for One Chance
VMA1998 chapter 17 . 5/7/2012
I love this story. It's great!
Sianatra chapter 17 . 5/7/2012
"Well, anyway. I killed the rat. The only problem, the only reason I got a two for a score is that...well none of the Gamemakers knew what I was doing. So they didn't know it was poison. I must have looked ridiculous to them. A small girl from District Twelve comes in and strangles a rat with an organic milkshake.


Okay, now since you've been home all day, you had better post that next chapter (WHICH I'M SURE YOU HAVE WRITTEN) tomorrow because I needz it.

And omg you are going to die when you go to your locker tomorrow. I had free time in three of my periods. o.0 But this makes for a rather elaborate collection of drawings and doodling and moaning about circumstances that you will most certainly enjoy. So...tomorrow. You shall enjoy(:
IWriteStuffWithWordsInIt chapter 2 . 5/7/2012
Awwww! Just on chapter 2 so far but I love it! It's better than my first fanfic I've been doing on Foxface

I like this though X-D

He should reveal at the interviews like 'Because I love her (Prim's) sister' X-D or something

Though, as you've done 17 chapters, you probably already have. I want them to both come home! Right! Now imma carry on reading!
Teleryn chapter 16 . 5/7/2012
You write well - I just kind of wish you'd stuck to Prim's POV the whole way through, because by the time you started bringing in an objective 3rd-person narrator as well as 3/4 different 1st-person narrators, my focus was all over the place. I appreciate you're trying to cover all the angles cinematically, but go easy on the reader! :)
Marilia11 chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
Love your story! Especially love the Katniss POVs! Update soon!
notinusebyee chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
Ahh its amazing!
Stacey Martinez chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
AHHHHH! You can't leave it there! Seriously! Please?
07Vampire-Ghost chapter 17 . 5/6/2012

I really love your fanfic is original :D Hoping the next chapter...
torigrace chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
I was really enjoying this chapter until it ended :( I like how smart Prim is. I hope they both get out somehow :/
skyfoot21 chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
I love this story. And I bet Elmo does too! :) :P
Hi chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
PLEASE UPDATE! Please please please!

I this
jwstahle chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
I love this chapter a lot. Please update soon.
rubiesandrain chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
Omg! I love this! I love this so much! Is Peeta or Prim going to die? Both options kill me! Update soon! :)
ofravenclaw chapter 17 . 5/6/2012

UUURRRGGHHHH NOW I DON'T WANT EITHER OF THEM TO DIE! you got me so attatched to both of them!
Dracoisalooker76 chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
Ooh, what now? update soon!
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