Reviews for Taking Wing
Sasame103 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Oh my God!

Such a beautifully weitten, awesome story. Extremely swell sentences, really good grammar and I have no objections about the story utself either. I love the idea of the Predators, whether it was yours or not (I mean you said it was a request, wasn't it?)

Zero was IC only a bit OOC during that moment when he said she was beautiful, but it perfectly fits the plot and it was not disturbing at all. The events were magnificenly constructed despite being a short story, I didn't have the feeling it was rushed at all. And believe me, when something is rushed, I hate it hahahha.

But I can only use the words of Mephisto Pheles: Wow fantastic! Bravo, bravissiomo, marvellous! Xdddd loved it

Yours magnificently,

Sasame103
aegyosonyu chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
O-M-G! I loved it! So much that I don't even know how to thank you and tell you how spectacular this was! I love love LOVE the intimate moment between Zero and Eve! *blushes crazy* w You are such an awesome person and thank you again for taking you're time to do this request! I LOVED IT!ヽ(;;)ノ
foxywox chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Aww, that was one of THE best stories EVER. I loved it! That was one of, if not the best, ZeroxOC story and just wow. Words cannot describe. Some of it was a bit fast paced but otherwise I think it was really good. No, more like AMAZING. Thank you so much for sharing this story! Red