Reviews for Monster
IloveZimandNny16 chapter 6 . 8/18/2014
Did you misspell Star Trek on purpose? Like one of those AU's where they watch simaler things, but with parodied titles?

But other than, pretty deep chapter. Though I forgot about Stark's deal, and for a little moment thought he was into drugs or some really extreme "fun times". Then once the stupid wore off...

Me: Ohhhhhh... Right...
IloveZimandNny16 chapter 5 . 8/14/2014
Interesting set up for Zoey to be in. Also, I can see the parallels from this chapter with that of Zoey's first day of the REAL HoN... Quite clever of you! Happy to see you're back! Missed you!
xxthefaultinourfandomsxx chapter 4 . 4/4/2014
Please continue this Fanfic! I loved it!
foxface333ChocolateLabrador chapter 4 . 1/8/2013
This is very much a oh-my-god-this-is-so-good-im-screaming review! This is an amazing story, although its very different, I think you've really managed to capture the essence of the characters...I honestly cannot wait to read more!
foxface333ChocolateLabrador chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Oh My Gosh I absolutely love this story! At first I was *sob* poor zoey *sob* and then I was full on bawling poor stark! I think you wrote that scene really well - you weren't speaking from experience though, I hope!?
foxface333ChocolateLabrador chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I wasn't sure if I would like this story because as you said, its a little OOC, but I'm absolutely hooked!
KShade chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
This is good. I like to see the new portrayals of these characters
IloveZimandNny16 chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
EEEEEEEEEEEEE! HAPPY FACE, HAPPY FACE, HAPPY FACE! SOOO HAPPY FACE THAT THIS HAS BEEN UPDATED! *squeee* Oops pulled a Todd.. Hehehe... WHY AM I LAUGHING!? Nisroc got beaten! Kalona is an even bigger asshole to his kids here, and Rephiam(I suspect) might be losing it!
Oh wait... Your A/N... Hehehe... And don't worry... You can use the Rephiam on a bike from me... Heck I don't even think that idea alone belongs to me... Its free game.
IloveZimandNny16 chapter 3 . 5/15/2012
AHA! I KNEW IT WHEN YOU TOLD ME THAT REPHIAM'S STORY WAS TO OBLITERATE HIS FEELINGS WOULD BE A PART OF STEVIE RAE'S! I JUST KNEW IT! This is gettin' reeeeal good. Also I find it a bit disturbing the way Stevie Rae knew just how perfectly to discribe Rephiam red eyes. "Like someone cut open a wound and bleed right on his eyes" I'm no expert but that in on itself sounds like a warning sign.
IloveZimandNny16 chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
I am a horrible person... That's all I havce to say... And don't try to agrue with me on this on... I was literally smilling the entire time... NO I DON'T KNOW WHY! It was just sooooo beautifuly, darkly, written that I couldn't help myself. Can't wait for Stevie Rae's thing... Hehehe
IloveZimandNny16 chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Niiiice... You knwo it really dies feel like I'm re-reading the Crank series... only with Zoey.. Also...

Hehehehehehehehe... I'm sorry I know nothing here should be funny... but I can't help but think of how ironic it is that Zoey finding this out about Heath is the same thing that happened to Linda... HAHAHahahaha! Hey if I can laugh at a schizaphranic hobo who yells out "THE CRAP IS SAP. THE TREE IS ME!"(one of the best literay lines of all time... I'm just saying) then I think I can laugh here... What?