|Reviews for Silent but Deadly|
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2016
great story, and the "..." brought the video games to real life haha loved it!
| NumbKid chapter 5 . 8/5/2016
Whoah. Thank God he wasn't mute. I thought something happened that made him physically impossible to speak. Glad that Ash opened up. I really liked the fact that May kissed him. I did not expect that. Cute little story, good job!
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/2/2016
Awesome I love it and it is a great story
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/14/2016
I was a bit underwellmed I thought the reveal would be ash died. It's otherwise a good story I would say ash abandoning a Pokémon is OOC but then I remember Pidgeot
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Great chapter and plot
| Pegasister60 chapter 5 . 4/11/2016
I love the way you wrote Ash, and how his shell cracked until the ship shone through! You are amazing and this story is too!
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/23/2016
| Blackcharizard62 chapter 5 . 2/15/2016
Dude come back plz?
| kittymaster70 chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
THIS WAS AMAZING!
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2015
That was an amazing story. Whenever I look for great Ash and May love stories, I'm usually presented with lazy work. Yet, this was unbelievable. I couldn't stop reading. Keep up the great writing, and you will have yourself another subscriber.
| ash ketchum chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
hey guys i think gengar
wants to try this fanfic in the real world
| guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
DUDE WHAT THE HELL! MAN Y DONT U WRITE ANYMORE YOURE THE BEST ADVANCESHIPPING WRITTER PLEASE COME BACK !
| Matthew lol chapter 5 . 7/30/2015
great story. this is one of the best and i have read about 15 other fanfictions from different people. you should make more like this.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2015
Can u plz Ash recapture Buizel?
| ArceusAnand1702 chapter 5 . 6/5/2015
NICE STORY BRO BUT I THOUGHT THAT BETRAYAL AS A THEME WOULD MAKE THIS FANFICTION EVEN MORE INTERESTING.