Reviews for Silent but Deadly
Guest chapter 5 . 7/21/2015
Can u plz Ash recapture Buizel?
ArceusAnand1702 chapter 5 . 6/5/2015
NICE STORY BRO BUT I THOUGHT THAT BETRAYAL AS A THEME WOULD MAKE THIS FANFICTION EVEN MORE INTERESTING.
PokemonTiger18 chapter 5 . 5/1/2015
Nice job!
Lover of Pokemon chapter 5 . 3/31/2015
Great story! This was actually the second advanceshipping story I ever read (first one was the champion is never forgotten) and this is my fourth time reading through it. Still great. I would try to convince you to write the sequel with them going to unova but you don't write anymore...I really wish you would...best of luck.
Bulbreon chapter 5 . 2/15/2015
This ending kinda made me mad considering you basically made May sloppy seconds compared to Dawn. But alas, it was a great story nonetheless.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/12/2014
What happens next write! write! write!
Luckylol chapter 5 . 10/31/2014
OMG great story loved it so much I love the part where delia calls ash ashykins LOL :D
AlphaMewtwo chapter 5 . 10/23/2014
Freaking awesome...in this fanfic it was a good idea to have all his pokemon evolve but maybe you shouldve had Ash show ALL his evolved pokemon to everyone.
chadflair196 chapter 5 . 8/31/2014
one word for this whole thing and it's WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/30/2014
brilliant work! Very deep and suspense fic! Enjoyed every moment of reading :)
xXEndl3ssGmerXx chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
Aw man there's a little pearl shipping in dis man screw di... Jk greatest story ever really love it if u have any other advanced shipping plz either email me at or I'll try to find it until then bahy
xXEndl3ssGmerXx chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
Dude this story is nothing I've read before really love it make more ad shipping don't worry if no one else reads it I'll read it :)
xXEndl3ssGmerXx chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Amazing luv the storyline I'll try to finish chapter 2 tonight thx 4 great story
Guest chapter 5 . 7/12/2014
Dude...I'm not even joking when I say, how the crap did you put this masterful fanfic together? I've never read ANY fan-made story this good...Except for a few apparent typos. But hey, I have a rep for being a bit nitpicky, so you should probably ignore this review altogether. :D
irezel chapter 5 . 6/1/2014
gosh darnit, that was adorable. XD
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