Reviews for Charlie's house
kotsui chapter 2 . 6h
i love it i hope we can read a new chapter
www.majestic.unicorn.13 chapter 2 . 6/15
This is really good! I thought bk her boyfriend should be either Mike or Edward, but I think you should sexually pair her up with another girl as well.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/8
Please update
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
Ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ewewewewewe! What the fuck is wrong with you people? How sick can you be to write something like this, and to read and like! Ugh! My god is this the kind of upbringing you suffered, or its totally you? Do you desire your own parents sexually? Ugh i don't even wanna know. Just EW! EWEWEWEWEW!
Skylie chapter 2 . 2/9
Pls write on more of charlie watching bella and edward/jacob
Fer chapter 2 . 10/10/2017
Let her be an slut
tinkermist99 chapter 2 . 8/28/2017
plz update
NARELHOB chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
TO BE HONEST WITH YOU,I THINK THE CHAPTER YOU WROTE IS NOT SO EXCITING,I AM SURE YOU CAN ADD MORE ACTIONS AND EXCITEMENT IN CHAPTER 2,THE READERS NOW IS LOOKING FOR MORE THAN LONG SENTENCES BEFORE THE REAL ACTION,THEY HAVE NO TIME.
TRY TO HAVE MORE PERSONS TO BE PART OF YOUR STORY LIKE HER MOM,HER BROTHER OR UNCLE
Abo12wa chapter 2 . 7/2/2017
Please update
Twilight horny chapter 1 . 6/8/2017
I think I am having a orgasm
Guest chapter 2 . 5/27/2017
I love you fuck your dad you should have his baby girl
So you can teach her to suck your daddy and hers.
When she is 5 teach her fuck and eat pussy
HyperA1985 chapter 2 . 3/12/2017
I am looking forward to chapter 2 and I hope the daughter was successfully impregnated by her own father.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
NO
Ahornygirl chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
Omg... this just made me so horny, I wanna fuck a big long cock and suck it, my pussys so wet...
Anastacia K chapter 1 . 1/18/2017
can you please update its been foreveer
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