This is interesting

Dude even in canon Laxus was Wizard Saint level. Makarov was close to matching the Four Gods of Ishgar and Gildarts is even stronger than him, able to go toe to toe with God Serena. So, by the logic that Laxus, who shat all over Gajeel in a fight, could only manage to beat Natsu once over the years, then Natsu should not have had any trouble with Gajeel.

Why did he have trouble with an opponent like Gajeel? You hype him up to be so damned strong and he gets hurt and tired fron fighting Gajeel. This bodes ill for the rest of the story. Judging from the scaling, Natsu should be able to match many of the Wizard Saints yet it doesn’t seem that way.

Wow the first few chapters of this storyare some of the best I’ve read lately

Umm isn’t forced confinement illegal in most countries?

Awesome story so far! Really hope that you continue it at some point! Also hope that you update another of your fairy tail stories sometime soon!

I like the story and the way you shaped the original plot to your advantage. I personally like the NaLu when Natsu is the chaos dragon slayer, since Lucy manages to see beyond the monstrous image that everyone had of him and come to understand him and help him to be a better version of himself without completely changing his personality, however, in the end the final decision will depend on the author because it is his story and his thinking about which couple should be with Natsu is as important as ours.

he better not like Lucy. please

Nah gajeel isn't at Miras level should she be able to beat him relatively easy.

So Natsu curb stomped a wizard saint and now can't beat this asshole?

Acnologia can eat space. which means Natsu can so he should be immune to that element.

why is elfman still yelling about being a man when Mira is still her punk self? didn't elfman only start yelling about being manly after Lisanna died?

This is trash just like the other fanfics I trade to read natsu always weak asf you make out like erza the strongest wizard. It's just Luke in the anime natsu trash got trained bye igneel and couldn't even beat Gray that's shocken

This story had potential but your lack of any actual fairy tail lore is mind blowing and your writing needs a lot of work. This crazy lady can't be selling virgo or Leo at all! It's impossible within lore, just because you changed one character wouldn't mean several other character story's are now different. A few things can change sure but not these two characters... Good god's did you actually watch the show or read the manga before you throw this out? Your lack of knowledge says otherwise. I feel like you saw the first few episodes of the anima then decide to make this and now you just look foolish!

Again raised by arguably the strongest and angriest dragon and he's not firing his magic off to try and break the seal? The black dragon could eat any element to power himself up including magic and you're telling me his son isn't trying to eat the seal... Are you stupid? This natsu is so pathetic. "I'm dark and raised by death it's self pretty much but instead of fighting like I was trained to do I'm going to cry in a corner"
That's how this chapter reads... No wander your story got no traction and is most likely dead