|Reviews for The Only One That Mattered|
| DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
FINALLY! i was ready to kick her ass, why was she saying no all the time? thats the only thing i wish we would have learned but really i think she said at a great time, i was big pile of goo reading edward with little sammy jo. i enjoyed it :)
| Packy 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Pissing my pants laughing... How dare Bella deny Edward 345678 times? Felt like I was in NM/Eclipse all over again... Hahaaaa, jk
This was kinda hilarious. Only thibg was that the format of the story made it hard for me to differentiate the leaps in time. Like there couldve been like a partition between timp jumps. All in all though, a very sell aritten story. Good luck in the contest
| ordinary vamp chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
I felt so bad for Edward! When Bella said yes, I cheered :) Good luck in the contest.
| SydneyAlice chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Good luck in the contest!
| freakamongfreaks chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Loved it! You conveyed Edward's feelings very well, I was so sad for him as she kept refusing. The moment when she changed her mind was so sweet!
| jpmoonlight chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
oh my god... i was more hurt than him... How can someone hear so many rejections? babes, this was the most scaary proposal of all... i would really really like to know why she said no first 1000 times... An outtake or something, please?
| abstract way chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
This is a very charming story and I really enjoyed it. I especially loved Edward telling his baby daughter that her Mom had waited all this time to marry him because she wanted her to be the flower girl...definitely a swoony moment.
You are a creative story teller. Your Edward is a real sweetheart so I have to wonder why Bella always says no...I guess that's the mysterious part of the story. Some of the transitions between scenes could be smoother but overall I really love it. Great job!
| lynninlove1007 chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
| TKegl chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Well, it's about time! LoL! Poor, persistent Edward! :)
This was a lot of fun, though - good luck in the contest!
| edwardsfavoritebrunette chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Oh my gosh! I totally wanted Edward to stalk off and make Bella see that there's only so many times she can turn down the perfect man before he stops seeing her! I also wanted Edward to realize that sometimes, a proposal in the safety and comfort of your home with just your loved one is good enough. They're kind of an infuriating couple :P
Bella's reasons and reactions for each proposal were so hilarious. It's sweet that things all worked out in the end. I'm not a fan of transitions that aren't marked off, but this story was fluid enough. You pulled off multiple proposals in one story - show off! Lol
| Kapriiwhoosh chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Somewhere in the story I wanted to slap Bella -stubborn too much. I mean, Edward was always so patient and loving lol
But everything went well at the end hehehehe. Good luck! :)