|Reviews for Tattoo|
| Mootycakes chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
Pretty awesome lemon! I'd love to see more...or a sequel lol.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Is so fantastic, amazing...hot...*-*
| GotzNoAccount chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I'm turned on by foreign languages, too... DERP. I said nothing O_O
Great story, by the way ;) keep it up!
| oo chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
ohhhh goooddd nooo my virgin eyes and virgin face
my virginity was stolen by this noooooooooeesss
| Dinders chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
| icingsugar chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
| GlibCharm chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
I'm a pretty harsh critic when it comes to sex scenes but this one I found quite enjoyable. The language used was mature and the imagery was well executed. It was also really sexy, so props.
As for things i would improve on, I would say that the beginning seemed a bit rushed..which is understandable because It was sort of a means to an end to set up this one shot, but perhaps drawing that out a bit would give the overall feel of the story a slower more even pace. Also theres one part that I didn't like:
After the line
"Maybe his little Jew didn't hate him as much as he acted."
I think that the action is also a little rushed, maybe adding a paragraph or two of the tension building up to the next paragraph would help.
Other than that. kick as job. :D
| Illiaara chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
OMG that was AMAZING! You write really well and I've read a LOT of fics (tbh, a bit embarrassing how much I've actually read).
I'm begging for a sequel, PLEASE
| symphknot chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
I LOVED IT...really...is a scene hot :)
| G0han-chan chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
I LOVE SOOOOOOOO MUCH! write more fics like that! o / I'm the first to comment with very proud :D. VERY HOT
I need this tatoo *LOL