Reviews for Zim meets Robin
Kelsey Raine chapter 6 . 5/2
Did you just... ?
Throw in Danny Phantom?
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 6 . 8/20/2012
"Yo, Danny Fenton he just fourteen, when his parents built a very strange machine."
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
The BB-Raven exchange was HILARIOUS! XD lmao
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
I've noticed that you tend to misplace commas. They create a "comma splice" and create a choppy, incoherent sentence.
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
Your dialogue is off. Ask Twins for help on this but mainly double space between new lines of speaking from a different character.
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 2 . 8/20/2012
****Always capitalize "I" or "I'm"****

I can't figure out if the story is present or past tense... It flips around too much...

Anywho...*grabs Gir and runs*
The Sandman's Daughter chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Be careful of "your" versus "you're". Many people get confused on this.

Also, your tenses weren't always correctly used.

On another note: OMG GIR! I LOVE GIR! XD
Overlord-Zenorac chapter 4 . 8/2/2012
pretty damn good especially the detAIL TO THE cartoon and the script. i salute you.
Twinkie-Defense-M.M.W chapter 15 . 7/10/2012
Great chapter! You really have talent. :) I liked your new and improved too. Hope to read more!
Awesomo3000 chapter 13 . 6/11/2012
Whoa, such an awesome and intense chapter! I love it! :) Keep up the great work!
CMR Rosa chapter 12 . 6/1/2012
This was a good chapter.
Himawari28h chapter 12 . 5/31/2012
This is very interesting 3
CMR Rosa chapter 8 . 5/12/2012
Good chapter, will Dib be in the next chapter.
CMR Rosa chapter 6 . 5/2/2012
Great chapter, will Dib befriend the teen titans and get revenge on his classments?
InvaderZaz chapter 4 . 4/27/2012
Yay! I truly didn't expect to find anything when I searched for a Teen Titans and Invader Zim crossover.
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