Reviews for Applejack
lemon-rind chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
AH! No. Tears. No. Well written though. Thank you.
Lanaholic chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Woah, my heart.. it hurts. Swallows.. pain.. sadness..

I'm totally with Austin - this is very good and well observed!

"Because I remember when I was Miss Swan ("I will destroy you"), then I was Deputy ("I will settle on tolerating you") and later Sheriff ("I find you bearable"), then dear ("I trust you") and then just Swan ("I need you")."

Very well done!
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Why are you trying to break my heart? Wonderful job!
AustinMarina chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
"Because I remember when I was Miss Swan ("I will destroy you"), then I was Deputy ("I will settle on tolerating you") and later Sheriff ("I find you bearable"), then dear ("I trust you") and then just Swan ("I need you")."

I liked the above lines because you cleverly encapsulated the evolution of their relationship by answering the question: What's in a name?

Ug, this was heartbreaking! Excellent read!
miekhead chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Ohhhhh my creys! How delicious though.. the angst is perfect and it's exceptionally written!
msredux chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Why must you broke my heart like this?

it was really beautiful
inkfiction chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Oh, God, this story! All the feelings. And so beautifully written.
Avarenda chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Way too sad. Good though.
JustAnotherAnon chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
I've read this more than once. I could probably read it many more times because it's so short and so sad but ughhh so good. Id honestly love to see more of this but it's lovely as it is already :) thanks for writing this ughhh now I'm gonna go sit in a corner and be sad.