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| incense-whiskers chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
i wear my maple leaf with pride
| Feibush Melech chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
This story was depressing. Reading what Alfred was going through as he was slowly dying and know one seeming to care for him not even his own brother I think. It's like he won't be miss when he is gone. Also you did a good job with how you worded this story. Overall both a good sad story that is well written.
I have two questions about your story though. Does this take place around the American Civil War (because it was mention it was civil war in the beginning) and why is Gilbert dead in this one? Well it's obvious in this story it's just that in the original story he was still alive despite not being a country anymore. As a side note Prussia was actually dissolved. It didn't get destroy like it was the case with both Heracles' mom and Rome. It was probably a lot more peaceful and less violent then what Rome and Heracles' mom went thought.