Reviews for Mr Green Eyes
AndreaO22 chapter 33 . 4/18
The writing and grammar of this story is so bad but I found myself staying for the plot. I wish you would write it over with an editor.
love edward percy edsme eragon chapter 1 . 1/16
I love this story so much. though I have wondered who did kill bellas dad
MessyBrownCurls chapter 8 . 1/3
Eventhogh fiction I am carving some more... reality-based drama in here its just a bit too fast moving to make sense, the plot is amazing just a little rough around the edges.
banshee69 chapter 33 . 12/27/2016
Thanks for sharing your story.

banshee69 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
Had this one on my TBR list and I've decided to pull it up and give it a read.

susieq3210 chapter 33 . 8/15/2016
What ever happened to Angie?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/29/2016
Your writing style is too immature for me with really bad grammes. First chapter and I'm already giving up. People who have reviewed obviously don't give a shit about quality work!
Mireads chapter 33 . 2/12/2016
Loved this story
Guest chapter 12 . 11/10/2015
You write the shortest sex scenes. Absolutely awful. And lay off the 'Mr green eyes' say it way too much. Sounds stupid. But then again Bella is a stupid dumb whore. Makes me sick
Guest chapter 11 . 11/10/2015
Bella is probably so stretched out Edward can't feel anything when they have sex. Slut
Guest chapter 10 . 11/10/2015
The sex was crap. Bella is just a loose whore.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/10/2015
Guest chapter 8 . 11/10/2015
Guest chapter 7 . 11/10/2015
Slut bella
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
Bella you whore
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