|Reviews for What If?|
| heart0fgold chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
this is cool :3 please write more!
| EternalBlaze123 chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
Nice story, though The lemon could have been a bit more detailed.
Please read mine?
| iamAnnabethJackson chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
Yes it's very normal to have only 2rrviews. I know it's annoying becuz you would think if someone tool the time to read the story, they'd be willing to review but anyways... So cute!
| Marie Alexis Masen chapter 5 . 3/2/2013
oh my god! it was so cute! :3 :3
| ShadowSnitch7681 chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
I liked this, it was good. There should be more AmyxElder fanfics!
| How I Make Lemonade chapter 5 . 12/19/2012
great cliff hanger! I can't wait to see where you take this story. also, cant wait for amy's dad's reaction :P UPDATE!
| magickarpet14 chapter 4 . 8/15/2012
Okay now you have to update soon. And by soon I mean like now! So please UPDATE!
| Crimson-skys chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
1: I really like this. :) it could be a little more detailed, but over all it's not a bad fanfic :) keep it up.
2: for an idea (and it's just a suggestion, and probably isn't a very good one) you could have something wrong with the baby. Jump forward a few weeks or something and have the baby too small, or have the lungs not develop properly or something (just an idea, again, and it's probably not what you want to write about...). Good luck with your writers block (sucks right?) and hope to see the new chapter soon :) xx