Reviews for Fall Out
omg chapter 1 . 5/11
love it
bookgirl chapter 25 . 2/3
Please update asap!
Guest chapter 19 . 8/11/2014

Bens new name: Sewee
viralsisamazing chapter 25 . 5/24/2014
I have been reading this story off and on for 3 days and it is AMAZING! I need the next chapter! I. Am. Dying. With. Anticipation.
Guest chapter 25 . 5/23/2014
Update! This is so good
Anais chapter 25 . 5/2/2014
Hey, big fan of your writing! You are amazing, please become a writer! I love your style and I got so carried away with it all, I forgot that this was even a fanfic and not a novel by Kathy! Seriously you are amazing! I would give a 1000000000000/10 ! I love how you have created your own mystery for them to solve, instead of the other fanfics where they just write about a scene (not very good quality) But yours... JEEES! :)))))))))))))))))))

Please keep posting new chapters please please please please xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx -anais
X.summergrey.X chapter 3 . 5/1/2014
whoa! you just killed Hannah! wonder where this is going.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/1/2014
Lilboiblue is ben, Alphawolf is tory, tech doctor is Shelton and LarryDuckableGuy is Hiram. The new name for Ben should be BlueEgz&Ham
Annonymous chapter 25 . 4/28/2014
OMG love it! Keep on writing!
IzzyBellTheWriter chapter 25 . 4/27/2014
This damn near perfect to me. I gotta say the best Virals fanfic I've read so far. The connection with Tory and Ben is just beautiful. Please, keep making more chapters! It would make me and lot's of other people VERY happy. Great job and keep writing!
The Bad Boy Chicka chapter 25 . 4/9/2014

gryffindorrk chapter 25 . 3/18/2014
This was great! I don't care that I was a filler chapter I loved it! I am excited for the collition (not sure how to spell that)!

AP test suck! I have two this year, so definitely not as many as you, but still very stressful! Good luck in them!

skyrcro chapter 18 . 3/18/2014
Mincingly isn't a word. I'm hoping you meant menacingly. Otherwise I'm now just hungry for mincemeat pie loo
Guest chapter 3 . 3/17/2014
Spelling errors: 1, should be pale skin. Pail is a type of bucket. 2, distraction 3, through
skyrcro chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
Dude. You love run on sentences, don't you? Also, punctuation definitely needs work. Spelling as well (in the 1st chapter you wrote 'flair' when it should have been 'flare'. They're two different words comoletely). Also switching from first person to third person, it happened once in the first chapter and that confused things a little bit. Mostly the biggest problem for me is punctuation and the run on sentences. Just stop, pause and breathe. Let the characters breathe. Let your readers take a break and put in some periods and commas!
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