|Reviews for Change|
| Zak saturday 1 chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
update soon please
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
When will you finish
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I like it alot but I think the rating should be M not T But hey still hot as hell. :]
| 1DDeep chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
1) might I recommend changing the rating especially for the second chapter.
2) i noticed several areas where you completely forgot a subject or object.
3) your verb tense was scattered
4) your transition from explaination to story was sudden and confusing try to slide into the next stage.
Other than that I enjoyed thepairing and I may actually write a fic of this pairing. Very Well Done!
| Iamhappytojustbealive chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
I wasn't that big of a fan of the movie... despite that, however, I really enjoyed this story. It's nice to find a story that's well written and has a good plot. I hope that you update soon. I hate to see a good story not finished...
| jonasgurl19 chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
| jonasgurl19 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
(covers mouth) Go WEN OR rillard
| PortgasDAva chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
i really love it! are thesse a series of oneshots?