|Reviews for Baby Brother|
| cam the fan chapter 23 . 2/6
Hey I have spent the past 3 days reading this and fell in love with it. You have at talent for this and I would be honored if you were to check out anyone of my stories, and give me feedback. I am about to start reading KAte's story. Anyway really nice fic. Loved it!
| EternalFalsity chapter 23 . 8/21/2013
Ever since I read this story all I can imagine is Hikaru calling Kaoru his baby brother, and visualize them the way you depicted them in your story. Honestly, your story was the perfect closure I needed and I couldn't have asked for anything more. Moreover, your style of writing is envious. I'm going to always look back on your writing when I'm stuck in English class trying to determine how to make dialogue work without repeating "xxx said, xxx replied, xxx said". Still, even though I have no intention of pursuing creative writing for any means; I thoroughly enjoy reading it. I've probably repeated myself too much, but you do have an admirable talent of being able to put what's on your mind into writing!
| EternalFalsity chapter 22 . 8/18/2013
ಥಥ I love you.
This chapter was blissful, I mean what else do I even say? I don't even know what to say when I review each chapter other than "this was so great, great job blah blah". I hope it doesn't sound so repetitive to you, but I really mean it when I say this story is fantastic.
No but seriously, I'm not reading the last chapter yet... I will re-read/skim the previous chapters I read just so I don't read it. I can't believe it's already coming to an end so soon :'( I still have your other Hikara x Kaoru (smut?) fiction which I'm very excited to read. Ugh I can't bear to finish all if your writing so soon though, so I need to take my time.
| EternalFalsity chapter 21 . 8/18/2013
IM SO SAD THAT ITS ALMOST OVER...I CANT BELIEVE I MAY FINISH THIS IN ONE DAY WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER?
| EternalFalsity chapter 19 . 8/18/2013
I'm so sorry for spamming you with reviews today, but I just can't help it!
I have to be honest, I pretty quickly skimmed most Tamaki x Kyouya parts because I'm not really a fan of that couple, but I love how you set up your story so you would be able to (if you wanted) skip some parts and still completely understand the plot!
I rewatched the end of episode 21 where Kaoru said "Still, one day Hikaru will realize he wants to take the next step on his own.. when that happens I don't know what I'll do." to see if I would be super sad again ( I just recently finished the anime). I still of course was a little sad (although the manga helped cure that sadness a lot), but after reading your story it made me feel so much better! I owe you so much I can't even express it in words. I love this story so much and your writing ahhh :O
| EternalFalsity chapter 18 . 8/18/2013
THIS IS SO STRESSFUL :o but good
| EternalFalsity chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
| EternalFalsity chapter 15 . 8/18/2013
Pft there are definitely gentleman reading this fiction! haha but, I wish there was another 100,000 words..I tried my hardest to not read another chapter today but I CAN't stop it is just too good. The story just sped up and I'm reading faster than i can drink water!
| EternalFalsity chapter 14 . 8/18/2013
forcing myself to take a break.. thank god I have about 9 chapters left! i was sad there wouldn't be smut, but loved the idea of an piece dedicated to that topic. Regardless I'm favoriting this story before finishing it... No matter what happens there's zero doubt I loved these past 14 chapters every bit of them. I'm going to saviour he last few ;)
| EternalFalsity chapter 11 . 8/18/2013
I swear your story better have a happy ending in some sort of way, even if they end up not being together or else I'll be depressed forever. LOL but seriously... i feel like I owe you so much, I was searching so very hard for a story for closure after the anime. the manga gave me a lot of closure, but your fanfic has just further enforced it. it's just so fun to read and exciting. You don't make the "mistake" of a steriotypical plot where I can forsee everything, and you don't have crazy plot twist that are there for no reason (i pray im not speaking too soon :p). But i was suprised when you said Kaoru went to Kyoya instead of Honey, since Honey is so prominent in the manga and smart, but it is your own story! :)
| EternalFalsity chapter 10 . 8/18/2013
thank you for not making Hikaru deny that he was at the hospital that would've upset me so much lol! another great chapter... in fact all of them so far have been perfectt hmhmhmhmm
| EternalFalsity chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
Sigh i really want to take a break and make this story last, but you keep giving these amazing cliff hangers and just too good plots and blah. I'm conflicted with wanting to finish this story asap to see how it ends and if I will still love it as much as I did up to this chapter. But honestly, I don't know how people like you come up with such great plots and manage to put them in writing so beautifully
| EternalFalsity chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
;(. I like fan fiction since it cheers me up, and this story is so great with it. You even had the kindness to ask if the OCs were pushing the teaders away. I hate OC's but you I like yours and they hardly impact the story, if they do then it's done within reason. I'm really loving this story so far so happy with it.
| EternalFalsity chapter 5 . 8/18/2013
When Hikaru saw Kaoru I thought it was an illusion LOL but it was real. Also i absolutely love the fluffy moments between them two, and I typically don't care for other relations in stories but I like the way you depict Mori and hunny a lot, and the "mommy and daddy" too lmao. i need to slow down reading this before i finish it too fast!
| EternalFalsity chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
I like the intro where you mentioned you don't hate Haruhi, neither do I in any way. I think fans take it a little to far by saying they hate a character just because it's in the way of a fantasy relationship between to character's they'd like to happen. That being said, fan-fiction (and other fiction) allows any characters to be together within the writers own reason. I completely admire that you respect that fact and you aren't delusional in the sense that you wouldn't pointlessly bash one character for no logical reason. (I'm talking about in general, not bashing in a story, bashing in a story is some-what different I guess :P)
Anyways, I just had to go on my computer to review this and say I'm super enthusiastic about reading this story and I hope the next 20-ish chapters are as good as the first two have been! Thanks for making this :)