Reviews for Astro's mother
Amber chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
Finish this I must have more
Amber chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Oh no
Reid958 chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
Wow I love it, in the 1980s the way Astro/atom mother behave in the way at the start is diffrenet. Well I geuss u know what mean, but I like it when set the story up.
Rama Olendris chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Your story concept is top notch, not many people think of this scenario. Granted it was done officially in the original concept though not as extreme to the feelings of your Sakura.

However you need to work on your grammar. It is distracting and takes away the drama of your story to suddenly have necessary conjunctions missing or the wrong tense of a word thrown in an otherwise great story.
astro-.-luvr10 chapter 2 . 5/19/2012
It took you a lot of time to update
astro-.-luvr10 chapter 2 . 5/19/2012
It took you a lot of time to update
AstroGirl101 chapter 2 . 5/19/2012
Ooooo this waz really good! :D update soon please! :)
Books52 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
AWSOME story. Keep up the good work
AstroGirl101 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Ooh that's sad she has 2 luv Astro, she just has 2 he's so cute ! Update soon please! :D
Takeshie 96000 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
Sounds like a really good story keep it up