Reviews for Surviving
Clytaemnestra chapter 13 . 9/25/2013
Your story was so good! That ending especially was beautiful. I like the way you handled the characters, I think they acted very realistically. Your original ideas were great, and I loved how you were able to wrap up the plot in only 13 chapters. I would say the only thing which really bother me was that your language was a bit grandiose sometimes. It's okay to just use the first word which comes to mind, you don't need to break out the thesaurus every time. Unless that's just the way you think, in which case I would still recommend you tone it down for us mere mortals. But that tiny issue did nothing to decrease my enjoyment of your most excellent tale.
onecelestialbeing chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
This...is..AMAZING.
kitty2lion chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
grast ending
kitty2lion chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
great one again
kitty2lion chapter 11 . 8/31/2013
nice one 10
kitty2lion chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
go Snape
kitty2lion chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
ending it like this - that i sooo not nice
kitty2lion chapter 7 . 8/31/2013
5
kitty2lion chapter 6 . 8/31/2013
more please :-)
kitty2lion chapter 5 . 8/31/2013
next please
kitty2lion chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
can't stop reading
kitty2lion chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
captivating
kitty2lion chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
intriguing
kitty2lion chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
interesting
AlsoSprachOdin chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
How Ophelia.
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