|Reviews for Surviving|
| excessivelyperky chapter 8 . 1/10
At least the good doctor realizes that Luna is not the only distressed party, and that Snape likely has more PTSD than the rest of the school combined. And Snape is called upon to give comfort; it's only Luna that has given him any.
But he's sensitive enough to hear her scream.
| excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 12/6/2014
I think Madam Pomfrey doesn't mind Snape taking tea to Luna; in fact, I think she rather hopes that both of them will eat properly.
Luna has a good question-why is Snape still there? One reason is that Snape has never thought of himself as having the freedom to go anywhere but Hogwarts or Azkaban, or possibly Spinners End. Luna, for all her house being gone, hasn't been a prisoner for nearly as long as Snape has.
And...after what she did, and I suspect she absorbed his nightmares into her own, Snape cannot leave her to wither and die. There is a link between them now, and even the chief PTSD guy recognizes (Pomfrey already has).
Very good chapter. Of course Snape is going to look to potions first; but I think he needs to look inside his own heart.
| excessivelyperky chapter 6 . 11/22/2014
Ah, it sounds like both Draco and Harry are an item in the newspaper because...they are an item.
And Snape's feelings for Luna are quite real as well, and Poppy does recognize that, but wants to make sure Luna is protected, reasonably enough. Love the use of her stormtrooper voice on everyone in the room, though.
| excessivelyperky chapter 5 . 10/27/2014
Extremely good chapter. And I suspect that Luna didn't mind giving up the yellow high-tops in exchange for the pearl.
Plus, it may be that Luna will tell Snape that if she tells about her nightmares, he has to tell about hers.
(the problem with confiding in Dumbledore, I suspect, was that Snape never knew when anything he said would be used to manipulate him or hurt him. After all, given what happened when he was a student, why on earth would he trust Albus to do anything *nice* for him?).
| FreeSpiritSeeker chapter 13 . 10/19/2014
Absolutely beautiful, brilliant story. I couldn't stop reading it.
| excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 9/22/2014
I'm glad Severus was there-Luna might have decided to go swimming without him, and never come back again. Snape also knows what it's like to be chased for sport, though one hopes the Marauders never went quite that far with him (though stripping him naked was probably almost as bad).
It's obviously that Luna's been written off ever since she entered Hogwarts the same way Snape was, though-Flitwick never did anything about the way she was bullied, either.
| excessivelyperky chapter 3 . 8/9/2014
Yes. Severus is finally realizing how much of a prisoner he has been for how long, from the bizarre way freedom is starting to feel. And I suspect he won't spend another year at Hogwarts, unless he's forced into it by the Ministry or Minerva.
He might, however, for Luna, who will have her seventh year there.
But then I believe they will both leave.
After sharing this memorial, I doubt they will remain separated except by necessity.
| excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 7/29/2014
Oh, how lovely! He finally realizes the price that Luna is paying for his own restful sleep, and is good enough to send her away.
But...one hopes that 'free to go' means 'free to go where he wants to, and not to Azkaban' and 'free to tell the sodding reporters and even more sodding Ministry people where to go'.
And he misses her.
| XxXSmiles101XxX chapter 13 . 7/11/2014
Perfect, brilliant and just amazing. I really love and enjoy this story, even if some parts were a little sad. It is just a perfect, sweet, cute and lovely story. Well done :D
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Excellent! Luna, sometimes, is the only one of them who sees clearly.
It would have been nice for Minerva to apologize for trying to kill him, but I suppose she'd rather not bring that up (besides, if Snape dropped everyone from his social circle for trying to kill him, the only one he'd have left would be...Luna.).
Love the black knight imagery.
| Clytaemnestra chapter 13 . 9/25/2013
Your story was so good! That ending especially was beautiful. I like the way you handled the characters, I think they acted very realistically. Your original ideas were great, and I loved how you were able to wrap up the plot in only 13 chapters. I would say the only thing which really bother me was that your language was a bit grandiose sometimes. It's okay to just use the first word which comes to mind, you don't need to break out the thesaurus every time. Unless that's just the way you think, in which case I would still recommend you tone it down for us mere mortals. But that tiny issue did nothing to decrease my enjoyment of your most excellent tale.
| onecelestialbeing chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
| kitty2lion chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
| kitty2lion chapter 12 . 8/31/2013
great one again
| kitty2lion chapter 11 . 8/31/2013
nice one 10